this is a sequel to another story: just called Council of Celestias, by Salnax, Approved by him personally.
from where it was last left off, the Good Celestias (Canon Celestia and Hasbro Celestia) must team up with the S.A.R's Celestia and Luna if they hope to face off the Anti-Celestias for good, as well gain additional help from the Mane 6, and Writing Glory, before the Anti-Celestias are allowed to pull off a treacherous crime.
the images in the image collection were made by other various artistes.
rated teen for fighting, bodly harm, some cursing, the fact Molestia is in this, and tagged sad, comedy, adventure, and random as a starting point.
Chapters (1)
Wow.
Story needs prereader... badly.
359839 i already had this story looked at by Exia151. what more could you want?
A new paragraph when someone new is speaking.
Spell check.
Check a
dictionary
to make sure that the word you used is the word you meant to use. to bare = to remove clothes; to bear = to carry
Double check your verb tenses. Make sure they're consistent in the main prose. Dialogue can be whatever is appropriate to the action or the characters.
359859 (groan)
, damn it, yet more work for my other editor Vulbes. thanks alot, mac, you prevoked me to fire Exia151 as my editor. i hope your proud of yourself.
The idea was good, the plot was strong... but poor grammar and overuse of comma's ruined this story. In order to fix it up, you need to start at the beginning and when you reach the end, stop.
Spelling, mate. It's a good thing to keep in mind. Also why drag an OC pony, a daughter of Celestia no less, into all this?
359929 Writing Glory is actselly based on the Lauran Frost character. didn't you read the Tale of Writing Glory? (an earlyer story that is still in prosess). and what's your problem with OC characters?
359936 No problem with OC characters. I just think making the OC character the never before seen sister/brother/mother/father/daughter/son/aunt/uncle/niece/nephew/typewriter/accordion of an established character too be a bit much. And no I've never heard of the character before. Nor have I read the Tale of Writing Glory. However that really shouldn't matter.
359965 oh. sorry, my stories tend to be chained with each-other, you know, connected with eachother like an on-going adventure story, like, my little pony friendship is magic done my way.
359976 Ah. In that case, you might want to give people a heads up in the description. A link to the story would probably help.
359981 sorry, i am somewhat delusional that this fanfic series is popular, when in a sad reality i am a terrably misunderstood writer genius with temperment issues that is offen accused of being a troll or incapable of speaking english because of my bad spelling. have you or anyone you know have that problem?
359988 I don't believe I'm terribly misunderstood or the other issues you mentioned, but I do know what it's like to put your stories and ideas out there and then get totally ignored. Kinda why I sympathize with Luna's character so much.
360058 i have to delete the comment because it was causing lag. you did seen it right?
360081 Yeah, I saw it. Saved it too since I hadn't seen a vector of it before.
360098 i also have to delete your privious comment because of broken link. sorry, polocy.
I thought it was good. Could have used better spacing, but still good.
360945 thanks. do you ever have a story that you thought was gonna be a masterpiece and worked really hard on it and gave it your all yet people hate on it because of some mistakes?
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lol I think I know that feeling and that's why I refrain from posting until it's perfect.
Did you use a word processor for this? It can reduce the spelling/grammar mistakes greatly.
Frankly the story failed to impress me. However, I still give you a thumbs up due to effort.
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Heh, wish I could say yes, but to be honest, I don't really have much confidence in my writing abilities. It honestly surprised me when people said they liked my stories. Now if only I wasn't stuck on what to put in my next chapter. I know what I want to do with the one after it, but I can't figure out how to make the one I'm on work.
I liked it. Sure, the editing could be a bit better, I have no idea who Writing Glory is, and you spelled my name wrong. But it was an appropriately epic tale, on a scale worthy of the entities in question. I wish Hasbro could have gotten a chance to really stand out, that's just a little fantasy of mine. Liked, tracked, and favorited.
365567 thanks, even though this still suffered the sequil curse: that it ends up not as likeable as the original.
Why no Drunklestia? How bout Momylestia?
When you think about it Luna should be stronger than both teams combined.
3305698 this is mainly for the more NOTABLE Memelestias.
3305704 Well, i am somewhat of a Celestia favorist.
3307028 Huh. I was really waiting for someone to as why Luna should be the strongest.
3309149 Well this ain't a Luna favor rally, mack.
3309159 Mack?
3309187 it's an expression.
3309193 and it means?
3309342 it's like, a brooklin, boston talk. I mean, i'm from west new york, and, i was being witty with you.
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You know, the joke isn't funny if you forced the comedian to explain it, buster!
3309353 or is it? Dun Dun Dun.