I... I...

I think I'm going to make a blog about this.

It made that much of an impression on me.

No, seriously.

I felt that much emotion just from reading it--I'm going to blog it.

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Bring back the octopussy it was better

4480323 Ok sure go ahead if you want. But give Max some credit.

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Gotta catch them all.

Glad to see this hasn't died. I honestly was worried. Fantastic chapter and writing. I'm liking where the story is going. Keep up the excellent work

this was so good that im going to sing at a bee

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Fantastic chapter and writing.

I don't think you quite understand what the word fantastic means.

13,37 views man.

4480438 What?

Honestly i don't think they know of him being there yet. Firstly we know it wasn't Flutters (the only one we know for sure has seen him, though she may pass of the meeting between them as a dream considering she woke up on her couch) who ran to the Princesses since he didn't recognise the mare and he was pretty careful with getting into town so i thinks it's unlikely anyone knows of him yet and the mare that was talking to the Princesses was likely addressing a different problem and he still in the clear, so if he is careful he should be able to remain hidden... However they could always investigate into him afterwards, I mean whilst Luna gave no direct indication of seeing him she could have just been waiting till she can tell Celestia about it so that they can see what it was.

Well my theory aside it was an awesome chapter and it's good to see this is still alive. Hope to see another update soon
Ciao

That roar was weak... Try this

Well this was a great chapter and I cannot wait for the next one. Keep up the great work. Brohoof /)
~ Techsol

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you need a male roar or something try a big daddy roar! not exactly scary but...damn is the thing loud
also nice chapter can't wait to see more

4480419 Perhaps not the textbook definition, but it does mean that I enjoyed the chapter. Not to mention its difficult to find writers that don't completely botch a story with poor grammar. So yes, this chapter was fantastic

I gotta wonder though:
Dafuq were those humans?
Is this one of those universes where Ponies enslaved humanity or some thing like that?

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Haha, I hope you wasn't wearing an earphone full volu when you watched it XD

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Haha, I hope you wasn't wearing an earphone full volu when you watched it XD

4482326 Yes, here's a link to the group for this particular universe if you want to read similar stories or the original.

I love this story, its unique and I couldn't say anything bad about it even if I tried, I hope to see more, and even better if it dosn't take three months for it to update...jk

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Not really my cup of tea TBH,I just find it impossible for ponies the moment the canon was created to actually do it ,unless it's full Deus Ex Machina,and the implications that can be brought up are...quite misanthropic.

Then again I may be just making things up because I have not read it.
Just the concept is a turn-off,but I do like this story,though I've got to ask how it got all those thumbs up at chapter 1.

Nothing too amazing happened yet that made it stand out from the rest,chapter 2 on the other hand was the point where things got a bit more interesting and lived up to all those upvotes.

Not a bash to this fic,just a persontal opinion

4486341 I understand its not for everyone so your honesty is appreciated and I'm also surprised that my readers have liked this story as much as the have as well as staying with me even with my three month writers block WHICH IS UNACCEPTABLE ON MY PART.

But the chapters will hopefully be more frequent.

Also a small spoiler: Shits going down.

4485776 cute Nazi pony

okay my mind is a bit ......discombobulated (holy shit first time I spelled that right) right now so my thoughts will be a list

1 my brain wont stop imagining him like Naruto four tail mode (cant post pictures)

2 I just realized the bright side of this type of universe (cant remember the name) has a easy to score bonus

3 prediction if he ends up at odds with the ponies ( because conflict is fun) I want him to pretend to be a well trained pet who's owner is talking through a microphone and half way through take off his mask and say something badass

4 I forgot what I was goanna write

twilight is ashamed of my crappy list

4564296 On number 3 take into account he can't talk.

Failure to notice naked collared humans....

yeah hes got problems