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Derring-Do is an aspiring archaeologist studying the long fabled and mythical Lost Kingdom of Thule, a highly advanced civilization that mysteriously disappeared thousands of years ago beneath the depths of the ocean. The key to finding this lost civilization is the lost journal of Clover the Clever, said to have intricate instructions on how to get to Thule. Unfortunately for Derring, she has no evidence for either even existing.

That is, until a mysterious benefactor offers to fund an expedition and take her on her first, and possibly last adventure.

Basically, Disney's Atlantis: The Lost Empire with ponies.

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i think you mean, Daring-Do. Not Derring-Do

derring-do?

excuse me.

Y U THREE YEARS OLD?

Good! I'm interested to see where this goes. I love the movie Atlantis.
Just one grammar thing, "it's" means "it is" and "its" is a possessive.

as the first guy stated, you spelled "Daring" wrong.

Dude you condemned your own fic by spelling the name wrong.......................

I didn't think it was possible to fail that hard.

Tough crowd. To be fair to the author, if one hadn't noticed that the name is actually spelled out "Daring Do" on the cover of the books in the show, the natural assumption would be that it is spelled, as the author spelled it, "Derring-Do."

Just started reading... you might want to work on your tenses.
"
Penworthy trotted up the steps to the museum, her saddlebag rustling with her recently completed manuscript. It only took her about four hours to do, but a Gryphonian typewriter, combined with the fact that her latest work was a children's book meant that she could've finished it in two hours if she hadn't stopped for lunch. Regardless of speed or directed audience, she was genuinely proud of it, as she was in all of her works and in books in general (except for the ones written by her less-than-savory brother Lemon Lime. )"

Other than that, it looks nice so far! I'll be waiting for the next update!

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Thanks for the tips on grammar and I'm very much glad that you like it.

I'll try and maybe get at least one or two updates out this week before I fall into the slump known as the United States education.

Very nice i do hope you continue it!

Derring O_O (yeah I know, its getting old)

DERRING?!?

I don't want to live on this planet anymore.

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Indeed, it's very much intentional. Mostly because I like being contrary just to see how people react.

this is actually rather promising.

So far, I'd say this belongs in the "stuff that should be made canon by hasbro" folder... I DO need to make that...

bless you for info file chapters...

So lysander the traitorous griffin... Mu the demolitionist... bet the diamond dog is Mole... where'd Fleur go?
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oh wait having her go would be a killer to fancy pants in the end... unless the plot varied.

I call for a fanmovie!

Yay for Vinyl replacing that dour old hag in the movie! What was her name... ah Mrs. Packard!

Trixie = Cookie? That scares me... Colgate's perfect though, and I'd say Braeburn too. Now... Rourke is a griffin... where's Demoman and Audrey... and Helga?? I don't think we've run into them yet.

One question. How will Derring Do meet the love interest? will there even be one, and will it be a guy instead of a girl on account of gender reversal?

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To be frank, I'm making a lot of this up as I go along, I only have a general idea of what's going to happen. A love interest is actually quite the interesting proposition, I might play around with that.

The only thing I'm sure I'm going to change around is the 3rd Act from the movie, I didn't like it that much, it was a little weak.

493416 Third act... which part was that? Oh and if you want ideas or help smoothing the plot, then just e-mail me! I may not be able to post any stories of my own ATM but I love to help out if you'll let me.

Your call.

How do you know that it's not another hero, maybe Daring Do's daughter?

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To clarify on the misspelling of Daring's name:
Derring-Do is essentially the inspiration for Daring Do, the fictional character in the MLP universe. Daring is essentially an exaggeration of her.

I'm more or less basing Derring-Do off of T.E. Lawrence, a clear cut archaeological badass that actually existed.

504537 I loved that thing with Vinyl and Octavia. That fit the role to a Tee.

Hmmm... I had an inspiration!

An awkward one, but an inspiration alright.

And thus the real adventure began.

490682 isn't Mu the demoman?
Loving the story by the way... Eh, by any chance are you a troper?

553437 Depends. I love hanging on TVTropes but I don't have an account or a hand in anything there.

Aww sweet. You cameo'd the Halo Lightbridge. I loved that thing! And these trials... they weren't in the movie. You have used the power of artistic license and I am loving it.
I mean... lava whales? Lessee... I assume there will be other Trials? The Thulians probably had a heyday making these things.

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The Trials indeed weren't present in the movie, however they were intended to be according to it's original script. You'd be surprised how much stuff was in the development of Atlantis: The Lost Empire before Disney execs trimmed it.

ah... just bugs. Why did it have to be giant bugs? Oh well... giant bugs make good eating. Drilling that Weta was an interesting thought... I like it.

So, the griffins have flak cannons... I can get used to this...:twilightsmile:

Geting really good i have to agree cant wait to read chapter 3 :)

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People are still reading this? Damn. Regardless however, I do have to note this is on hiatus. I simply lack the drive to continue this story.

Plus, from a technical standpoint, it kinda sucks. Hopefully I'll get back to it, but not at the moment. I'd like for you all to see my other Daring Do fic (an actual one mind you) and I do have another fic in the works.

Thanks for reading.

1327627 I DON'T CARE JUST FIND A TIME TO WATCH ATLANTIS AND WORK ON IT!!!!:twilightangry2:... please:fluttershysad:

Is that... *Heavenly light shines on this fic.* It is.
An Atlantis crossover...

It's so... beautiful...


:heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart:

can you try to make another chapter please?:fluttershysad:

1327627 I read that one and it's on hiatus as well! aren't you going to update anything?

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NO IT DOES NOT. IT DOES NOT SUCK.

I don't care one bit that you misspelled "Daring Do". I don't care about the errors.
Atlantis: The Lost Empire is my favorite Disney movie of all time, and has been since I was a kid. I can never truly hate it.
That movie was my favorite, and is still such today.

Thank you for reigniting my desire to rewatch that amazing movie.

It seems that this wonderful story long forgotten? Or can say, FOREVER!

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