[Experiment: First-person recollection]
In a moment of thought, Rainbow Dash recalls the days surrounding her promotion to Captain of the Wonderbolts. She details the conversations and reactions of those close to her, causing her to question her old mentor and her new subordinates. She asks herself...was the choice made the right one? What did it mean to her? And most importantly, what did it mean to Spitfire?
Written for the Rainbow Dash writing contest from a few months ago. I never found enough time or inspiration to finish my entry. So, as an experiment in writing first-person past-tense, I'm going to flesh out the idea and submit it chapter by chapter.
Chapters (2)
I give it 15 out of 1 happy pinkies
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WhatisthisandwhyamIscared.
It's SAO amazing? As amazing as Sword Art Online? Hot damn, Batman, that's pretty amazing.
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wat... okay let me clear things up a bit
the term "sao" for me is "so" but when you're squeeing and that's how it comes out
now don't be scared of the rating it was really good
Great story! I always love it when people know how to write a mature Rainbow Dash. Nice job on the first-person-narrator, too. It goes well with the story.
/5 moustaches for you. And a fav.
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Your doing great! Just keep doing what you're doing!
Why was this cancelled?
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I lost my inspiration for the story, which also meant I lost all direction for it. My focus changed to other projects, and over time I just forgot about this one altogether. Now I don't even remember where my notes on it are.