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QuilliamPenn


I AM ALIVE ONCE MORE

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Twilight wakes up and simply doesn't feel like doing anything today.

Discord is responsible, of course. Why else would Twilight become lazy? I mean, seriously.

The result involves strange noises made whilst stretching, a rude letter, singing, potato chips and Discord's video camera.

Oh, this is going to be fun.


CONSUMER WARNING

This story is not meant to be taken entirely too seriously, as it is a silly one-shot and should be taken as such.

Any attempt to take it too seriously may result minor cases of annoyance or displeasure. In rare cases, extreme butthurt has been reported, a condition afflicting people who don't like my sense of humor.

Proceed with caution, expect major silliness, and a parody of a Bruno Mars song.

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Comments ( 11 )

ROFLMAO!!! :rainbowlaugh:

I could see Discord doing this too, without any malign intent at all on his part ...

:pinkiegasp: The beginning of the story was great and especially where Discord was talking to the narrator.

I need to think about this but this could use a little more expansion since this looks like it could be a pretty funny plot.

Other things:
Characters like Discord, Fluttershy, and Spike were right on.

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3935246 Glad you liked it, thank you very much :pinkiehappy:

Even though it makes sense, I would change the title so it does not sound so disrespectful.

Titles like:
"Twilazy Sparkle" or "The day Twilight grew lazy" would be better but that's up to you.

Again, this is a good story and it comes with a good lesson for Twilight. It also has a good lesson for Twilight to learn.

After Twilight said “Oh well…I’ll worry about it later…”, I mentally shouted "OHH SHHHHH-"
Discord doing a "Fonzie" was pretty humorous.
I don't think the song fit as seamlessly here. Could be the repetition...or that I've only heard the original tune once.
Anyway, nice write

you know what's more awesome? reading Twilight'song at the same time listening to the real one seriously it was just great!

3937241 Good! I'm glad you liked it :twilightsmile:

“Mhhh, I feel like being very self-indulgent today, maybe I’ll eat that whole bag of cheesy-garlic potato chips or something…”
“Twilight, yesterday you said you couldn’t eat too many of those because the chips made you…er…gassy…”
Twilight let out a scoff that quickly turned into a full out cackle, the sight of the normally serene, calm, level-headed, and one of the most powerful ponies alive rolling on the floor in a fit of laughter was something very new to Spike, and he wasn’t exactly sure if he should call somepony.
“Gassy-schmassy, I want some chips.” She said with a fading giggle

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Okay, this is the funniest thing I had read in my life :rainbowlaugh:

this story makes me think of this

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