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Short, but definitely delivered the feels in there.
Pinkie's button explanation was good, and she really was the only one who could do that, besides you, I guess.
Pity you couldn't make this longer, but it really would loose a bit of its touch if you made a sequel.
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Whhy? Whhhyyy?
Either Spike's dead (and Twilight doesn't care) or she didn't count him as one of her friends.
Also, this really doesn't need a dark tag; ponies dying from old age isn't dark. 
*Out
It's pretty good. The only thing I don't like is that Fluttershy died at 18. I think. It was worded a little weird. If that's the case, it just doesn't seem right. Rainbow Dash is at least 21 from one of the latest episodes, and Fluttershy is older than her and Pinkie.
Pinkie hunts your dreams wooooooo. Woooooooo
3981807 This is in the future. Thank you for the proofreading advice, but Rainbow Dash doesn't die at 21. And Fluttershy doesn't die at 18. Eightieth is different from eighteenth.
3981854 No no, I mean show ages. I meant Rainbow Dash is 21 in the show (21 candles on her birthday cake in the Weird Al episode). But I just thought you killed Fluttershy at age 18 in your story. Must've misread it, I guess
3981862 Okay. Gotcha.
I envy Pinkie's eloquence in her waning moments.
3981755 It's Twilight's selfish wants to resurrect and keep her friends as well as her actions and thoughts that are the dark part of this fanfic. It's not a very heavy dark tag, but it's definitely there if you look for it.
3981755 Spike is a dragon. Based on our equivalent of a two hour or so nap being a 100 year long slumber to them, I would guess that Spike would still be alive after 1 pony lifespan. So yes, Spike is still alive.
please, stop reminding me of elimentry you dark story's, please it is to much *breaks down*
Why do so many writers want to make Twilight sad?
read this story again but with this music
you will cry with a fresh batch of tears
3981807 If you mean that she's 21 from the fact that there were 21 candles on the cake in Pinkie Pride, well, that doesn't prove anything. Since Dash flew around in circles to blow out the candles, then there would have to be another set of 21 on the other side. Besides, candles don't always have to represent how old you are. Sorry to shatter your headcanon.
4178718 You didn't shatter anything. I find it very hard to think that Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy are younger than 21, though, simply because the show started 4 years ago and they were all young adults at the time. I assume that the ponies in the show live at least as long as humans do, if not longer. After all, Granny Smith is in her hundreds of years old... So they should be at least 21, if not older, in the show as it is now.
4178736 Oh, no, I'm not saying that they can't be 21. I'm just saying that the candles don't prove anything, and they especially don't explicitly state Rainbow's age. Otherwise, I actually agree with you.
4178920 Okay, cool. Maybe one day they'll just say how old they are...