Interrogation
Okay, sorry about the little extra waiting time. But there was one mother of a storm last night, and it kinda blew my garage door off.
Oh and it also caused the entire street to lose electricity…
In any case, I've had a long hard think on how to wrap up this story…and have come to something quite cool, at least I think so. You'll have to tell me.
Begin!
The Interrogation
(Interrogation)
I stared warily at the tea she was offering, narrowing my eyes somewhat they zoomed in on the liquid.
Upon gaining a closer look, my eyes scanned the rim of the cup for anything even remotely resembling powder. I know this might seem a little weird, but let me explain.
You see, when I was starting out here, there was something of a rivalry between Swift and a Earth Pony mare by the name of Bit Napper, though I doubt that was her real name. Swift always used to call her Bit the bitter…heh, it made me laugh.
In any case, she and Swift were always on each other's back, mostly because they always tended to out-steal the other.
Swift didn't even know me back then, and I was only thirteen at the time. My own skills were still a green as grass; I could just about manage to pickpocket a drunken mule.
The two of them were playing a rather intense game of shots when I noticed…something off about the small glass in his hoof. At the time my peculiar eyesight was something new to me, but I'd managed to more or less get it down pat.
Upon noticing something off about his glass, my curiosity got the better of me and I zoomed in to get a better look. As I did so, I noticed a rim of white powder, barely visible around the rim of it.
Fortunately for Swift, I'd seen something like this before.
Two Years Ago
Just as he was about to press it to his lips, I dived forward and smacked the glass out of his hoof.
"What the heck are you doing kid?!" Bit screeched angrily.
"There was powder around the glass," I explained, glaring at the now nervous mare accusingly.
Swift had since snapped out of his shock and was sniffing the glass carefully, though upon a single sniff he dropped it and looked at Bit incredulously, if not a little fearfully.
"That smelt like crushed Nirnroot," he said, his tone one of outrage. "You tried to poison me!"
Bit's muzzle was opening and closing at a remarkably fast rate, and her eyes were darting between us even quicker
"I…I wasn't trying…"
All of a sudden, she bolted away from the two of us as fast as her legs would allow. I tried to fly after her but found myself halted by a hoof on my withers. Looking back, I saw Swift gazing at me thankfully, much to my embarrassment.
"There's no need to chase her, kid," he said, a grim expression adorning his muzzle. "I'll tell the rest of the boys what happened, she won't be able to get within ten feet of this place."
"But she tried to kill you, we should a-"
"What?" he asked mirthfully. "Get her arrested? Drag her up to the guard and expect them not to arrest us too?"
I felt my cheeks go a bit red as I realized how stupid it actually sounded.
"Oh, sorry, it does sound a bit stupid," I mumbled.
Swift shook his head and grinned at me in amusement, though there a tad of confusion there.
"How long have you been here kid?" he asked curiously.
I cocked an eyebrow warily at the question, having already been asked…similar questions like it before.
"About four months, why do you ask?" I replied cautiously.
"Because you seem about green as grass and as innocent as a new born foal…"
He put a hoof under his muzzle and pursed his lips thoughtfully, muttering incoherent words to himself as he did so. After a minute or so, he apparently stopped thinking and looked down at me with a grin.
"Tell you what then, since you just saved my hide, how I take you under my wing and show your ropes?"
If scoffing was what he expected, his befuddled expression certainly didn't show it.
"Yeah…I've heard this before mate and I'm really not interested."
He squinted at me for a minute….before suddenly blanching and waving his hooves frantically.
"No, no that's disgusting," he shouted, shaking his head wildly. "I only want to show you how it all works down here, that's all. A who knows, maybe you'll pick up a few skills along the way."
"Just that then, no funny business?" I asked.
"No funny business kid, just me showing you how it's really done. Consider it a thank you for saving my life."
I eyed him warily for a few moments, not entirely sure whether or not to agree. True, I wasn't a very good thief. Even with my talent of staying hidden, pick pocketing and the like was still remarkably difficult to accomplish.
But if this turned out to be something like the last guy who wanted to help me…
"Okay then," I agreed slowly. "But I swear to Celestia, if there's even a HINT of something I don't like…"
"Okay, okay," he laughed, his right hoof slapping my withers friendly, much to my annoyance. "No funny stuff, I promise."
Grumbling, though with a little grin to compensate, I nodded and began to walk alongside him…only for Swift to suddenly stop and glance at me curiously.
"What's your name kid?" he asked.
"It's Chase," I replied.
Present Time
He took me under his wing after that, showing and telling me all I'd need to know about the Ratway and the Underworld. He'd come out with me on heists and show me what was valuable, and what was merely a prop, a fake.
He's the reason I'm so good at what I do.
And even when I started to go all lone wolf, he'd still drop whatever he was doing and help me if I needed it…even if I never asked him to help.
I suppose when it all came down to it, Swift was more than friend to me. He was a mentor for two years of my life…he was the only one I could trust in a world of lies and deception.
Until now that is.
Celestia hadn't taken her eyes off of me, nor had she uttered a single word, even whilst I obviously examined the cup.
There's no powder, and the tea looks alright…
A sudden titter of soft laughter snapped me out of my thoughts and onto Celestia, who was holding a hoof to her muzzle in amusement.
"Is something funny?" I snarled, surprising myself with the sheer amount of venom in my voice.
Celestia either didn't notice or chose to overlook it. In any case she quickly stilled her light giggling and regarded me regretfully.
"Oh, I do apologize," she said, bowing her head a touch. "But I found your scrutiny quite comical, forgive me."
I do have to admit that her gentle voice was most certainly soothing. But I knew better than to trust honeyed words, Swift had taught me that.
Swift…
His name…the betrayal that followed, it filled my very essence with a rage unlike any other. How could I have thought about him with such praise beforehand, when he had not so long ago betrayed what little trust I had?
"You're angry," Celestia uttered suddenly, yet quietly.
"It's none of your business Princess," I spat, scowling up at the great mare scornfully.
In all honesty, I was kind of hoping that my words would hurt her…or something. But alas they did not. She merely tilted her head and gazed at me regally, yet without a single bit of arrogance or superiority.
It was weird.
"Very well then," she said finally, lighting up her horn and grasping the furthest cup, before using her magic to steadily glide it over to me. "Will you at least drink some tea with me; I assure you it is in no way poisoned, whether by magic or alchemy."
"Of course it's not," I mocked, rolling my eyes.
"I swear on my sister's life that it is not," she promised, that smile still firmly adorned upon her muzzle.
I didn't believe her, I didn't trust her, and I had no reason whatsoever to drink the tea. Yet I did so anyway, much to my dismay and her apparent joy.
Why did I drink it?
"There we go," she said, smiling warmly. "There's nothing to be worried about, if I had truly wanted to do you harm than I would have already done so."
Her words, while annoyingly gentle, were true. I couldn't think of a reason she'd want to keep me alive, only to poison me later on…unless she was as much a tyrant as some believed?
Yet as I waited in silence, a silence she granted with nothing but that stupid smile, the results of poisoning never born fruit.
I had no stomach ache, no headache, no nausea…nothing.
"Is it nice?" she asked suddenly, forcing my attention onto her out of instinct.
"Is what nice?"
"The tea," she said. "It's a rare brand from Saddle Arabia; I've always been partial to it on occasion."
I blinked in honest confusion at the question…wasn't she supposed to be whittling me down with furious questions?
Though she did have a point, the tea was nice, in an exotic sort of way.
"It's fine," I muttered, draining the rest of the cup quickly so as to clear my suddenly dry, if not very nervous throat.
Then it hit me.
This was it. I was going to be interrogated by Celestia. There was every chance that whatever she had done to the others, to Swift…it could happen to me!
…No!
No! I will NOT become like him, I will NOT!
"My sister was correct wasn't she?"
Celestia's question snapped me out of my internal tirade, causing my eyes to snap onto her own.
"About what?" I asked, a light snarl fighting its way into my question.
To my surprise, Celestia flared up her magic and whisked both her cup and mine, as well as the tray and teapot away into nothing. She then turned slightly on the immensely large cushion, her entire body facing my direction.
Yet her eyes and smile, they remained the same…soft and warm.
"You possess far too much anger for one so young," she explained, her voice gentle and pitying.
I didn't need her pity.
"Oh really, what gave that away your highness?"
Still a smile, gentle and warm…why couldn't she just be angry? I could deal with angry.
"Everything about you tells the tale," she began. "Your attitude, your appearance, the pain you hide behind your eyes. All of it cries outrage, despair, vengeance upon a world you obviously hate."
Her smile, to my surprise, seemed to waver a little. It's everlasting mask of gentle content slipping into a brief outline of grief…for me?
"I cannot help but wonder," she continued, a slight change in her tone, yet another break of her perfect character. "What terrible wrong occurred to set you on this path?"
Her words were spoken effortlessly, perfectly even. The words she used, the way in which she used them…all of them true.
I felt my eyes sting upon hearing them, but I quickly blinked it away.
"What makes you think anything happened to me?" I asked.
Celestia said nothing for a few moments, choosing instead to merely regard me with sympathetic eyes.
"Where are your parents little one?" she asked suddenly.
I blinked a couple of times in surprise at the question, though my eyes quickly narrowed angrily as it sunk in.
"I don't have a clue," I replied bitterly. "And my name is not little one, it's Chase."
…Was she smirking?
"Oh?" she uttered mirthfully. "That's a very unusual name."
She was smirking!
"Is there something wrong with it?" I asked heatedly.
To my great satisfaction, Celestia put her hooves up in the air and waved them frantically. Though she was still smirking, much to my annoyance.
"Not at all," she said, "I just think it's rather cute is all."
Cute?
"My name is not cute!"
"Of course it's not," she agreed impishly. "Silly me."
"Are you mocking me?" I asked harshly, taking an intimidating step forward, not that she seemed perturbed in the slightest.
Though her eyes did widen a touch.
"No, no of course not," she dismissed contritely. "I was only trying to make you feel at ease, there's no need to be so hostile."
"No need?!" I all but screeched. "How DARE you! How dare you try to be so…so flippant after all you've done!"
"After all I've done?" she asked, her tone completely innocent. "And what have I done exactly?"
I won't lie, I don't have the best temper at times. But at that question…I felt something within me snap. Everything that had happened to me, whether within the past six months or before, all of the hate and rage that accompanied it…accompanied them.
It didn't simmer, it didn't heat up.
It burst from me like nothing I'd ever felt before.
"What have you DONE?" I began furiously. "What haven't you done?! I had a decent life before you started moulding half the underworld into good little ponies! I had a friend I could trust with my life before you twisted him into a shameful echo of himself!
"I had respect that everypony admired, but now they avoid me like a rabid dog. And what happens if I steal, what happens if I manage to find a broker and sell something at a quarter of what it should be? What if I offer those foolish idiots some bits to get by on?
"I'll tell you what, they REFUSE ME! They prefer to live in squalor! They want me to stay out of their pathetic little lives while they scrounge around in the dirt and wallow in their own self-pity. Oh, why won't anypony help us, all we want is a couple of bits to get by. Well I OFFERED! But no, my bits aren't good enough for them!
"But you know what, it's fine, it's absolutely fine. After all it's just pride. Once they have a few bits chucked at their hooves then they'll HAVE to respect me, they'll HAVE to accept me!
"And what luck do I have! A few days of pressing my ear to the ground and voila, Money Bags the local jeweller has managed to get a hold of a very valuable gem. A gem a certain CLIENT is prepared to pay handsomely for. So we meet up, have nice little chat, and then off he goes to wait for me in a secluded little spot."
My eyes were stinging like mad as I raved, but I didn't stop. I didn't dare stop now, for if I did…I wasn't sure what would happen.
"But oh ho ho, what do I happen to come across?" I continued, beside myself with rage. "A BUCKING SET UP! Yeah, that's right. My friend, my ONLY friend betrays me because of YOU! He betrays me because he wants what's best for me. Well he never asked me! All he did was plead and beg with me to come and see THE MIGHTY CELESTIA! All praise her divine will, all praise her OMNISCENT FLANK!
"And what do you do? You ask me what you've done, you dare to ask me what you've done. Well I'll tell you what you've done. You stole my friend, you stole my livelihood, you stole my life! And I hate you for it! I hate Swift! I hate those pathetic prideful mules! I hate you, I hate you, I HATE YOU, I HATE YOU, I HATE-"
Two hooves gently wrapped themselves around my trembling form, pulling me firmly, yet softly to their bearer. Trapped in my fury I was barely aware of it, I couldn't even see with all the tears in…my…eyes.
I'm crying?
I was…and I was still repeating that word, that hate…mumbling it actually.
"I hate you, I hate you…I hate you…I hate-"
Celestia kissed my forehead soothingly, the bizarre sensation of the touch breaking me out of my increasingly incoherent mutterings. I looked up at her with my bleary vision…and for the first time that day, I finally saw the emotion behind the eternal smile and tender eyes.
She cared for me, and upon realizing this…I fell apart.
"Why did Swift leave?" I sobbed helplessly, clinging onto her as I broke down. "Why does everypony hate me? I just wanted to help them and they threw it back in my face!"
I'm not sure how long I clung to her…for all intents and purposes crying like a little colt. But as she wrapped her wings around me, as she placed her lips upon my head, as she nuzzled me with affection I knew not…
As all of this happened…In that one moment, I let go of my dignity and became a child once more.
"Why does nopony love me?" I asked inconsolably.
A hoof stroking my back softly, a touch so gentle upon my wet cheek…a voice so tender, so affectionate against my ear.
"I love you, my little pony."
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Dude...whoa.
You should write shit like this more often!
Good lordy lord, I hope there's more. Yeah, this would have seemed awfully short if you were going for an epilogue next chapter.
Yes, we need more.
Wow. That was...wow.
MOAR!
Moar now plz
Wow, it looks like this is currently the top rated story on the site. Nice.
Chase is now best pony.
All the way. Screw Rainbow Dash. We've got Chase.
This chapter was equal parts awesome and epic, mixed with feelings.
This is a beautiful story, but I have one question:
If Celestia is this good, why doesn't she do something for those unfortunate ponies that live in the streets? Why doesn't she help them so they don't have to rely on stealing out of desperation?
Damn dude. Bravo
I really love this.
It's nice to read something so well-intending and sweet once in a while.
Great chapter man, you're doing great! I'd say this is easily better than the first.
Can't wait for the next update
So that's how she does it. She sits them down and gives them a shoulder to cry on.
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Who says she hasn't been doing that for the past six months?
Remember, Celestia started interrogating ponies six months ago. Then all of a sudden they had great lives, honest lives!
You'll see more on this next chappy, but she has helped a lot of ponies
Princess celestia. She plays with people's motality like one would play chess.
Or should i say, CHASE!
…
Sorry.
Anyway, great story, I faved and upvoted!
I get the funny feeling Celestia added a Truth Serum to the mix
DON'T FALL FOR IT CHASE! DON'T GO TOWARDS THE GOOD SIDE!
Well shit! I wasn't expecting something this good! EXCELLENT! *guitar solo*
he dods not need to be a completely honest pony in one step. no one can. but now he has the strength to make that first step needed.
Either I'm a total newbie when it comes to interrogations or this is nothing like what I would ever think of. I can see a bit of gaining reaction through kindness and not giving into the image of the person/pony has of you. You have busted the thought that this is going to be crazy Tia, but I still feel a small part of this could still go haywire. But then I'm always looking for plot elements to weave in and out and for the entire plot to suddenly turn on its head and soar in the other direction.
As far as grammar and spelling mistakes, there are a few parts I noticed. "rim of the it." from the line
That should be "around the rim of it." Ya accidentally added a "the". Also, possibly could change the part of "I noticed a rim of white powder" to "I noticed a line of white powder", like the glass was dipped in a bit of liquid before the powder was added.
In
the word "jeweler" is spelled wrong. You gave it an extra l. But that might be personal spelling, so if it sounds right to you then ignore that,
That's all for any grammar and spelling issues that I noticed. This is a pretty decent chapter and I'm looking forward to more. Good work. Hope that the weather doesn't go super crazy again. Best of luck with everything ya need to do, both story and real life wise.
This is the top rated story now!
You should feel honored! 
One age spell later and we have a new foal ready for adoption.
3941694 bravo! Bravo! As always, wonderful work sam. I'm absolutely impressed, and I can't wait to see more. Great job sweetie.
Oh man I fired up from his rant. Wow I think my laws between sanity broke. If I would ever steal I would do it for the rush, the adrenaline pumping though my veins all the things I would steal rubies, emaralds, diamonds, pricless artifacts, gold, and and
.....dang. Pardon me I have somethings to do.
On another note good chapter. I have a question about To Run from the Sun.
. Is there more to him?
When are you going to update it and I feel like there is more to Lee then what you wrote
Also keep up the great work your stories are GREAT! Fav is Help Thy Lonely Soul.
Fav Nightmare Moon story.
...What worries me is that there is a very distinct opportunity for you to make Celestia a tyrant in this story too.
I know you said you wanted to write Celestia in a good light for this one, but after reading your others...
I shall be cautiously optimistic.
This was great
please continue
An excellent line, a precursor to the sudden and very rapid break-down he had. Its very difficult to pull off scenes like this, and I avoid them myself because I don't think I could express what you have here in so many words. Chase's abrupt breakdown was easy to follow, tough to watch, and heart-breaking to witness.
Celestia has either refined this into an art in a very short six months, or has learned exactly what buttons to push. A private scene of Celestia's bookshelf or desk might help us in learning how she suddenly started onto this path of helping ponies one citizen at a time like this (councilling books, psychology, etc.)-- it can't be easy, and it must be very strenuous. Then again, a clever writer might link this into the Nightmare Moon mythos. Celestia feels eternally guilty for ignoring an outcast pony (her sister) with very clear issues, and spends her time helping one after another to blot the guilt from her heart. Meanwhile Luna looks on and wonders when her sister will forgive herself... but hey, that might be a little angsty for you. (Although this is Chase's story, so we might avoid this idea altogether...) Clearly Luna and the night guard have an active role in this, and we haven't even met up with Chase's best friend yet. That's going to be an explosive scene if he sees him too soon.
You've got some serious firepower in this story. Keep it up.
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That's exactly why Chase steals
And now he's broken...
Sure you say he wont out right become an honest pony but now it's pretty clear that the wont be a thief anymore.
Still, it'll be interesting to see what happens next chapter.
Eh....Ehh.....feels.....
MOAR!
Uninteresting.
A setup like that doesn't work well when the conflict is resolved so easily.
Ok, Celestia is definitely giving off the "Manipulative-100000-Year-Old-Chess-Master-Brainwash" vibe.
Nirnroot.
The Ratway.
A den of thieves living in said Ratway.
You like Skyrim don't you my friend
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You caught me
Chase's line "I just wanted to help them and they threw it back in my face!" has so many layers of irony. :)
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You stole, you stole, you stole!
Irony is everywhere in this chapter
I'm a bit so so about this fic. First of all his so called friend is an asshole in my eyes. I despise this "it's was what was best for you" bullshit. If he wanted to help him he would have given him the choice to accept it or not. What he did was betrayal plain and simple. Second I hope this isn't one of those "oh you made me see the error of my way I must change" stories. From what I seen he steal expensive, hard gained stuff and gives some bits to the less fortunate, so it's a little robin hood, sly copper thing over it and that's a respectable profession as any other. I say let him get contact with other ponies and make bonds but let him all so keep doing what he loves, Even if its stealing stuff.
Allso buck Swift that traitor.
3942203 So the author sort of failied at "writing Celestia in a good way", then?
Wow...
Bravo sir... bravo!!! 
HA, HE'S BAWLING LIKE A LITTLE BI-
Er, I mean, wow... that's, uh, unfortunate. Yeah, unfortunate.
I like how he just blew his top and then started crying
So awesome 
Bet the author might make Chase turn off and on with good and bad
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No not really. If the other people was happier in a life were they didn't need to steal and she helped them get it, then that's great. And so far she's only helped him relese the anger of him being betrayed and that's good. Its what she does after this that matters. If he wishes to do what he loves and continue stealing she might either throw him in jail ( he is a criminal after all) or find a way to let him continue doing it. (Maby only steal from blueblood and his friends). It only becomes "evil" if she tries to force him off the path he desires. In other words lay down her arguments but let him pick the path he wants.
3942203 The way I see it, Swift is clearly acting like it's an intervention to help save his friend Chase. I can somewhat understand why he'd make that decision, whether it was the best choice he could have made is still up in the air I think.
And that's exactly why.
I think I'm getting a vibe of what's motivating Chase. Were I writing his dialogue this would be his next line:
"You love me? Well then where the buck were you?
"I was abandoned. I was starving on the streets. I had to steal for a living from rich jerks--- jerks that YOU made into princes and lords and barons, while you left the rest of us in the gutters. And you were still sitting on your flank up here in a palace. And now you get my friends to betray me, so you can brainwash me into being a little goody-two-shoes like them-- so you can throw us BACK into the gutters where you found us! Hey, at least we won't be bothering the really IMPORTANT ponies anymore. Right? We'll even smile while you and your rich noble pets step on us, because you luuuuuuuuv us so much!
"You don't love me or any of us. You didn't even know we existed. You only noticed us because we started making the ones you REALLY care about uncomfortable. And once we're all good smiling little mindless sheep, you'll forget about us all over again."
No matter how hard anyone tries, i haven't seen a well written Celestia that doesn't come of as manipulative.
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Maby but then why not an actual intervention, with people he trust. If that failed then sure, but now he might have no real choice (well, depends on Celestia). He might have to give up what he loves doing, what's his special talent doing or risk jail because his friend betrayed him. Swift has forced him into a spot were he either becomes what Swift thinks he should be or is punished for being himself. That counts as betrayal if you ask me.
Woah...shit, looks like Swift had way more built up than one might expect. But...is it wrong of me to want him to cling to that hate, just a bit longer? He HAS suffered, indirectly true, from Celestia. Even the affection she's giving him now would not make that go away. Further, if this is going where I think it's going, I think it only fair for our main character to leave a mark on her as well. After all, this seems to be a thing she does for every one of the ponies that winds up with her like this. Moreover, however, I think she needs to know how failing one of them might feel, should she not explain how she might have failed others later.
This has so much potential, and already tugs at the heartstrings. I want this to have two characters develop, not just Shift transforming. Well done, and good luck, I can hardly wait for more.
Hold up...wait, what? ...Just why? This shit pisses me off. He had pride as a thief, and you change his character mid-way into a pained youth? ...What the fuck are you thinking? Is this some kind of twisted redemption story? Bloody damnation, this isn't what I'd thought I'd bought when I first picked up this story.
3941769 Honesty is for suckers. Lies paved the way for nations, for the world. Humanity lives on deception, vile Christian!
3942385 I don't think that line needed to exist, for exactly the reason you described. I just can't see Celestia as this complete mother figure. Most of the time, I see her as a remorseless cunt with a country upon her shoulders. There are reasons she does the shit she does, it's not whimsy. Has to protect everypony after all, she does.
Just take your time. You can not do anything about the weather.