• Member Since 9th Sep, 2013
  • offline last seen Feb 2nd, 2020

Commander Hot Stuff


At the end of the rainbow, according to ancient tales, lies a pot of gold. For a small colt, lying the consolation and hope to have his precious treasure back.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 6 )

I really like that it is implied that Big Mac is the guardian

This needs editing. It's good, but the grammar is terrible.

needs alot of editing but a good story i would like to see progress

Very good story. Like it has been said before, it needs some editing but this has some real potential. Keep it up!

I like it! and the romantic implication about big Mac and Dash! please keep going! fix the mistakes and you are up to go!

While it does have a few grammatical errors, it was adorable enough for me to overlook it.

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