I am aspiring to be a writter, so I have decided to go and see where it gets me.
I am a student of Journalism that has found himself in a world of talking, multicolored horses, I don't know what is happening, but things does not bode well for me at all.
This is a self insert story from an universe where "My little Pony" never existed, none of its generations, I will try make this as believable as possible, taking out words I never studied before "My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic" came to my life.
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Interesting, Tracking. You've got room to expand on this one.
Them genre tags, and that first paragraph... oh boy.
Well, your grammar is in shambles ('one of such I'm actually living it'. Read that aloud). You have a lot of unneeded parenthesis, the contents of which you can work into the narrative, and your tensing is inconsistent.
You need a lot of practice, my friend. For your next chapter, take it and read it back to yourself before you post, out loud if you can, but at least under your breath. You'll catch a lot of your grammar mistakes that way.
I'm noticing grammar errors but don't let that deter you. This is get good and I'm currently tracking. Don't let me down on this one.
355688 Thanks for the comment, I currently have no proof reader, I am currently looking for one, would you like to be the one? if so message me with your e-mail that way I will have someone to lean on.
355794 I will try not to, it kinda gets me that I have to stop on my other stories for a while as I want to go on this one, I hope I get it good.
Thanks for the comments.
355834 How ironic. A comment about grammar has a grammar error. Yeah, you know what I meant. xD
355845 ... Ok, just to make this straight. English is NOT my main languaje, I mainly get my spelling wrong because I rush it, I wanted to write this quickly because I thought about it when I did not have a notebook at hand at the moment, either way I speak it more than I actually write it, I will explain more about that later in the story but yeah I tend to f*ck up a lot and for that I am deeply sorry.
side note: I would love somepony to help me proof read.
355922 First, I was referring to MY comment. Re-read it. You might see what I mean. Also, I could proof-read if you want.
355999 send me an e-mail address and I will gladly send my draft for you to proof read.
355688 Ok I rearranged some things, point me out some more errors and I shall correct them in time.
HA! Loved the awkward moment!
The Great and Powerful Trixie?
463299 Yeah, as you read, I basically cracked up.
463405 Seems that you actually went and looked for it, Congratulations yes she is, I will give her back her name in due time, for now I will stick with her last name.
Me gusta.
This is not the edited version I sent you.
I don't care what anyone else says, this deserves more viewers, like RIGHT NOW
996356 Thanks for the support, I really appreciate it.
P.S. working on chapter 9 I wish it comes out soon
That reminded me of the Hercules movie (the cartoon one)
1222210 I wanted to do this for a while but I certainly didn't wanted to be a complete rip off of the fight so instead of a wall of rocks falling over I decided to look at the internal anatomy of the hydra... mainly because I have yet to read about it and it makes up a pretty gory and yet entertaining fight... for me at the very least.
Thanks for watching this
And the next chapter is where?
1536085 Chapter 10 is up, I am about halfway done with episode 11 so I hope to have it soon.
Thank you very much Malfarious for sending me the edited version.
I wish to thank all of you readers for putting up with my absence as I was in college until recently, now I will be on vacation and I hope to have a little more time to write more chapters... I hope.
yep trixe XDXDXD i knew it when i first read it
Wow, this is a very good story so far, I am impressed! And might I say, I'm glad that you included a reference from the great and powerful Acca-Dacca in a later chapter, without it I would never've found this story!
Keep up the good work!
Me gusta this series very much, I will continue monitoring this story, and will continue to follow it enthusiastically.
Godspeed, fellow brony from a few hours south, from a fellow brony in Houston, Texas.
-CommanderWolffe
P.S. Your grammar and linguistics with English are improving steadily, continue on this path and (assuming there are still several chapters to go) you'll be a decently-proficient Amatuer English-Language Author. Keep up the good work!
Really hope this updates some time soon.
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Any day now . . .