D.W. had always believed in unicorns. Especially a Unicorn called Uni, main character of the TV show My Fluffy Unicorn: sorcery and magic. So imagine her surprise when Uni turns up in their garden! Offered a trip to Fluffyland, D.W jumps at the chance. Her brother Arthur is less enthusiastic. However, unexpectedly they end up in the wrong kingdom, Equestria. Sensing a challenge to their rule, Celestia and Luna throw Uni into prison. Now only one pony, Twilight Sparkle, can save Uni and get the three home
Chapters (1)
Before Reading Chapter 1: Ummm just the description..... ummmmmmm arthur.... Plus mlp..... I don't want to know.... Do I?
Well here goes
After Chapter 1: well... Interesting but..... I already know its not for me. I will neither dislike or like this story, but you have a bit farther to go before some of this is more readable. Interesting theory, because it is interesting how in the actual Arthur show this fake My Little Pony show exists (albiet g3... Not g4) but is never talked about.only seen on television and in d.w.s room. (I was a kid once)
So good idea... But needs work
OoC big time
Great start! I was iffy about an Arthur crossover since I was never a big fan, but I'm loving it so far!
well, that esclated quickly