Seeing the helpless mare before her triggered something dark in Twilight. Something lurking deep within her that had finally broken free at the sight of true power. Twilight would not hold herself back any more. Fluttershy was her pet, she lived for her now.
Twilight brought her head close to Fluttershy's face, completely filling her vision with spirals.
"Fluttershy, listen to my words, hear and obey. Master Twilight is the only thing that matters in your life now. You will obey me always, even out of trance."
Twilight could not help but lick Fluttershy's lips in excitement.
"You live for me, I am your life. All your family? Friends? Meaningless compared to me. After I send you out to sell your house and take care of things, you will forget they even existed. I'm your life now."
Twilight wrapped her tail around both of their heads, pressing them together.
"You love being mindless, you love the feel of my coils, especially when they squeeze tightly like this. Most of all, you love being hypnotized. You want to stay in total trance forever, coming up only enough to become conscious enough to obey my commands. Come up too far and you'll beg me to put you under again."
"Hear me and obey, Fluttershy"
"Trust..."
"Love..."
"Obey..."
Fluttershy smiled blissfully as everything she had come to know was erased like a chalkboard: there was no Ponyville, there was no cottage or animals... There wasn't even any Twilight Sparkle. There was only her Master. Master Twilight.
"Trust... Love... Obey..." She repeated again. "I...I l-love my master... M-my master is my life.... I-I love you..." She said with ignited cheeks as she smiled mindlessly. "I am yours..."
"Good, my...slave, now to test it."
Twilight ended the hypnosis and loosed her coils enough for Fluttershy to slide out. Even through the mare's yellow fur, Twilight could see the bruising her constriction had caused. It gave a her a sick sense of pleasure, knowing that she had that much control over a pony. Twilight half thought she could have completely crushed Fluttershy and she would have died with a smile on her face.
As Fluttershy lay on the cold floor, Twilight couldn't help but wrap the end of her tail around Fluttershy's neck loosely. It was a sick necklace, a testament to Fluttershy's new life. The tip stroked Fluttershy's neck and jawline as Twilight waited to see how Fluttershy would behave as she came out of the total trance.
Her eyes now returned to their usual hue, Fluttershy gazed up at Twilight with a tired moan. "Ohhhhhh.... M-master? Why am I not in your coils? W-why am I not under your amazing power?" She exclaimed, her voice leaking with sincere sadness. "H-have I been bad?" Fluttershy felt extremely cold and naked in her consciousness. All she could remember was the happy place Master Twilight kept her in, and how much she wanted to go back there.
Twilight snapped, and a laugh erupted from deep within her. It was an evil laugh, the same kind that Twilight had used to make fun of Nightmare Moon and Chrysalis for. Twilight intentionally hammed it up, completely lost in her new persona. There was no going back now, only towards a brighter future.
"Not at all, my pet,” Twilight continued after the laugh had subsided. “I just have big plans for you, is all. I needed to see if you could function enough to order me more snake oil and maybe even convince other ponies to feel the joy that you're feeling right now. You've passed this test with flying colors."
"Now, for your reward..." Twilight said as she began the hypnosis again and started curling the rest of her snake tail around Fluttershy, wrapping from the neck down. Fluttershy's face suddenly beamed as Twilight praised her, her tail swishing around in joy once again as Twilight came down to hypnotize her, spirals once again filling her helpless eyes and pulling her into her enchanted state yet again.
Her body shivered with pure excitement despite being limp once again. The coils brushed against her messy and bruised fur, eliciting moans of joy instead of painful ones.
"Yes, Fluttershy, it's good when you give in so easily. When you're hypnotized, nothing can go wrong. So weak and helpless, it's pure bliss to be safe in my soft coils." Twilight new the words were preaching to the choir. Fluttershy was totally gone at this point; reprogrammed to be a puppet for Twilight's own amusement. Fluttershy knew every word Twilight spoke to her by heart now. Not having to think, and to feel safe in her grasp... that was the only bliss she knew, seemingly for her entire life.
With a push, Twilight turned Fluttershy sideways, moving her head to where a massive coil lay.
"Lick, Fluttershy, and tell me how my scales taste."
When turned over, Fluttershy gave her body a passionate lick, followed by a kiss to finish it. "Your scales taste amazing, Master... So soft and tasty... It's all I ever want..."
Twilight grinned. Fluttershy was her little pony, and soon she'd be joined by others. Fluttershy submitted so easily, it would be a fun challenge to brainwash a pony like Rainbow Dash or Applejack. With Pinkie Pie, she could even be fooled into thinking it was a game until it was too late. As her scales got a good licking, Twilight began to make plans and embrace her future as Master Twilight, Lamia Queen. Fluttershy snuggled against her Master's strong coils as she worshiped it. This was all she had ever known. Her Master made her so happy, and she was glad that she could return the affection. She had no idea what was in store for her, or what might happen in the future....
But the thought never crossed her mind.
Can you make a SEQUAL with this ending
Please Make a Sequel with this ending.
three votes for a sequel
PRETTY PLEASE MAKE A SEQUEL for both endings
one vote more for the sequel, i want to see Twilight brainwashing the rest of the Mane 6
You have GOT to make a sequel for this ending! Please?
For a sequel with this ending: You have my sword.
And a vote.
Squel for this ending:
67SEQUEL for this endding
Better than other lamia fiction I've read.
Not bad.
Please have a sequel with the bad end, pwetty pweese
oh by celestia's beard i want a sequel for this ending!
Like apparently everyone else that's seen this, I want a sequel with the bad ending. Make it happen!
Pwetty pwease......
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Wow, I underestimated the amount of sadists here. Alright, I'll work on a bad end sequel with Rainbow Dash and a good end sequel with Applejack.
3937396 I very much resent being call a sadist. It's true, but I resent it anyway.
I'd love to maybe see a change to the cutiemark of a reprogrammed pony! Something like snake coils wrapping around their original cutiemark or swirls etc. After all Twilight is basically giving them a new purpose in life
3937396 I am not a sadist!
I just have a hypnotism fetish. And a bondage fetish. And a slavery fetish. And...
I forget what point I was trying to make.
3937396 I like to think that your "bad ending" was a joke, and you really meant it was the good end!
This ending. Sequel. You. Computer. Internet. Fimfiction.net. Fingers. Keyboard. Typing. Now. I need a sequel for this ending!! Please?
SEQUEL WITH CELESTIA she says please
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that was dark!
I realize it's probably just symbolic at this point, but I want to cast my vote for a sequel to the BAD END. I looooooved Twilight dominating Fluttershy's mind completely and making her into her pet... so apparently, I'm a sick sadistic twat, and like any good widdle weeaboo, I want MOAR.
Rainbow, just give in... everypony's doing it...
This ending is great! You have my vote for a sequel to the bad ending!
I want a sequel please. PLEASE!
As soon as I read that penultimate paragraph, I had to do this. :)
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10/10 would hiss again.
I thought bad end meant twilight ate her...
I'm not sure if this is better or worse
5449310 This might be worse than that, Seeing as she now won't be an able go-to pony for animals, being the only one around.. also the element of kindness thing might cause some major life-or-death changes in the future.. but who cares! Mistress Twily!
SEQUELLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Please?
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We're all sadists here even me!
Anyone that wants a serious bad-end sequel, look up "Friendship is mind control" here on fimfic.
Warning: It starts something like a sequel to this bad end, but becomes Code Geass, both seasons.