Luna's latest attempt to prank Discord fails catastrophically, leaving her bedridden and powerless. But her duties must be taken care of.
While Celestia can handle the Moon, dreams are beyond her; but perhaps a certain purple alicorn can copy Luna's magic...
Set after, and references, Discord Comics, but is an independent story.
Created for the Equestria Daily Writer's Training Ground #007: "Simple Ways"
Feel free to point any flaws; it's why I'm taking part in the Writer's Training Grounds, after all.
Chapters (6)
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“Do you meant awesomest?”
Try replacing this line with one of these:
Do you mean awesomest?
Did you mean awesomest?
I think you meant awesomest.
“That she sometimes feel fear?”
"That she sometimes feels fear?”
“I guess you didn’t sent me into Scootaloo’s dream to deal with his nightmare.”
“I guess you didn’t send me into Scootaloo’s dream to deal with her nightmare.”
...same if that monster ever try to take over me again.”
...same should that monster ever try to take over me again.”
or
...same if that monster ever tries to take over me again.”
...making sure that the Ursa wouldn’t crush they in the few seconds...
...making sure that the Ursa wouldn’t crush them in the few seconds...
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Thanks, fixed.
It's curious how even after watching three seasons and half I still think about Rainbow Dash and Scootaloo as male, and always have to go back looking for places where I referenced them as such
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Thanks again. Fixed.
Error: "as a soft banjo lullaby took it’s place" when it should be "its", because the word is possessive, not a contraction.
Also, there was a place you forgot to capitalize Rarity.
The same error as in the last chapter: "making the library return to it’s usual shape" when the word should be "its".
Error: "That he should be wary of Celestias pranks", you forgot the apostrophe, and in the last paragraph, you forgot to capitalize "Discord".
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Thank you, fixed.