Martin is a human living in Ponyville, Equestria. He can't remember how he got there, but he's rebuilt his life surrounded by ponies, who took to him quickly. His pony friends include the famous Mane 6, especially Rainbow Dash, who he has build an almost family-like friendship with.
However, when she grows distant, Martin begins to question whether it's a friendship he shares with Rainbow, or something much deeper, but when another friend gets involved, he's left conflicted, having to make a life-changing decision.
Contains sexual references and mild language. This story also has two possible endings which the reader can decide.
Chapters (9)
Ah you mistake them dude, its Aloe and Lotus not vera, also why Pinkie? Wouldn't had much much sense Fluttershy? she is Dash kindergarden friend after all
Do you had plans to make a 3rd option where he choose both of them? I would like to know how that works out
it needs the option for both ponies and the human together, also good story
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I was going to add that as an option, but I really couldn't think of how it would work. Personally, I think choosing between the two makes it a bit more of a big choice than just being able to choose both.
Good story I'm glad I chose rainbow dash I happen to like her the most of the ponies but still I couldn't help but wonder if you'd ever make an interactive story I mean same idea but depending on the choices the reader makes they could either have a good ending with their favorite pony from the mane 6 luna celestia sunset shimmer queen chriystalis deeply Octavia or maybe vinyl scratch to a bad ending being either alone sent back home to the readers world, a criminal , or dead depends on you though
I meant derpy not deeply I REALLY hate my iPods spellcheck sometimes
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I suppose you are right, but that its what makes it interesting, I imagine both Dash and Rarity wanting to go back at Ace for what he did to them and Rarity now designing outfits for Dash now, special to race outfits
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I've thought about it, but this is my first ever fanfic, so I want to get used to writing proper stories before I start doing interactive ones. I've always loved them though, so I might one day.
Very good if i do say so myself, although there were the occasional grammar error it was very good indeed.Keep up the good work!
I chose Rainbow Dash because she's one of my most favorite ponies in the show.
Now I'm going to see what could've happened if I chose Rarity.
Not too shabby!
But I'll choose Rainbow over Rarity any day.
The story seemed a bit rushed at times but over all it was very good
WHAT THE FU*K? JUST FUC*ING HAPPENED? WHAA????????
Because ponies are fucking idiots