My name is Lyra Heartstrings. This is the story of my life.
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Looks good Ill read later!
ps: FIRST DAMN COMMENT, EAT IT.
Woah. Lyra... Woah... Poor mare. This is good. Sad but good.
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Do it now!!!
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Thanks! Don't you worry, it gets worse.
OMFG HARPERS DEAD WHY!!!!!!!!!
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Now you'll have to wait like the rest of us.
Cant wait till next chapter!
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I'm hoping either tomorrow or Saturday for it
In paragraph 6, you said "food grades", I assume you meant good. Just thought I'd point that out. But other than that, I loved it
and I'm waiting for the next chapter. Keep up the good work
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Thanks for that, I probably wouldn't have gotten it.
I hate to be "that pony", but I couldn't get into it because I was distracted by so many errors. It looks like a great story, but you need to do a little more proofreading before posting.
Sorry for the criticism, and again, it looks like a good story.
I take back what I said earlier. While there were a lot of errors, they were only a small distraction when I decided to give this another go. This has the makings of a great story
I can't wait to read more
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Thanks for the input! At least you gave it another try
I'll be going through the chapter here in the next day or two, so be on the lookout of corrections haha.
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"Ever since then, the harp has been my passion. So I guess that the harp was the distraction from school work. Whatever."
This was the main one that turned me off initially, and its because I'm somewhat of a perfectionist, nothing personal. I think you meant lyre every time you said harp in that part.