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"I thought this was what I wanted... I couldn't have been more wrong." ~Herbal Tea

When a young buck from Stable-157 ventures out into the Mareseyside Wasteland, he will embark on a journey that will reveal to him just as much about himself, as the world he had just entered. Friends and Enemies will come and go... But war... War Never Changes...

(Beta Reader: TyrellTheChaotic

(Cover Art by chezamoon18)

Chapters (2)
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Comments ( 7 )

This looks like a good story, welcome to the world of fallout equestria writing Archie :twilightsmile:

3930891 Hehe, thanks.

Planning on releasing the second chapter at some point in the next week or so. Trying to aim for a week on week posting until exams start up :pinkiehappy:

Hey man,
Found this;

“What? You think kill them will change anything!?” I shout back, although it doesn’t seem to faze them at all.

I'm assuming there's a -ing? I dunno, maybe the guys not to great with the talking.

Loving it so far.

Looks good so far.
Not rushed, but straight forward.
Keep on writing.

Usually I don't like (not dislike) fictions in which the Enclave is portayed as "evil just because", but if their action will be explained/"justified" afterwards, then it'll be alright.
On the other hand, this is exactly the kind of action, I use in the background of my story.

The only thing I'm wondering about:
Why does the overmare bleed if she's killed by the enclave?
Energy weapons normally don't let somepony bleed.

4086608
...That implies the Enclave got in there first...

4122329
Oh snap, it's a plot twist! :pinkiegasp: dam dam daaaaaaaaa!!!!!!!

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