• Member Since 30th Dec, 2013
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PoetryEmpress


Hello, I write poetry fiction about ponies. Occasionally I may spit up some kind of story, but be prepared for poetry. Also note that I do go around randomly liking/following/favoriting. Enjoy! C:

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Fluttershy and Twilight Sparkle had been a stable couple from the start.

But sometimes publicity becomes too much to bear - it hardly seems right for Twilight to blame her true love, but what else is there to do?

It takes four years to realize pouting about isn't going to fix anything.

{One-Shot}

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 14 )

No good... Sorry... :fluttercry:

ending just left us with a cliffhanger.
hardly any romance, only a few parts at that.

3915887 I thought the cliffhanger was interesting, to let the reader think about what they think may happen next.

3915891
not really.
for a story like this, it would be better to finish it.

3915893 I'll keep that in mind for next time.

3915882
Do not really have a decent plot and is not correct wery story. Sorry. :ajsleepy:

3915911 What do you mean by 'wery'? Sorry, this is my first romance, after all...

3915915

:'D Sorry... Google Translate... :rainbowlaugh:

i look at the cover picture for this and can't help but think aawwwww. twishy is my second favorite shiping.

3916066 TwiShy is my third favourite. <33

1. Appledash
2. Twidash (And secretly Pinkiedash...)
3. Twidash

If I had to pick one ship I hate beyond anything...

PinkieShy. I know it probably exists.... somewhere.

3916277 it exists, not as bad as you'd think if dun correctly. i don't really like or dislike appledash, although twidash is my favorite, (shocker right).

That cliffhanger tho.
Seriously? A cliffhanger? :facehoof:
Now i'am not saying it was bad (in fact i'am planing on maybe using the same conflict in my fic. About shy being scared of all the publicity :ajsmug:)
It made me feel and the cliffhanger left me in suspense. 7/10 if you truly are done with this one :raritywink: (If ANYTHING pops in to you'r head about continuing this drama story write it down and try and expand upon the story. :yay: Totally fine if you don't want to tho. :scootangel:)

P.S.
TwiShy is my fav ship along with AppleDash and Rixie.

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