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HyperBlossom7


Your friendly neighborhood disaster lesbian at your service. I write pony words and squee over my ships.

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NOTE: ON HIATUS FOR REWRITING. SHOULD BE DONE IN A FEW WEEKS. SEE BLOG POST FOR DETAILS

Twilight Sparkle learns of a hidden magic with a source that is located in Ghastly Gorge. Since Spike is away in Canterlot, she must go to the gorge alone to investigate the source. She is not prepared for what she finds, and is severely injured as a result. Rainbow Dash finds her in time and due to certain circumstances, takes it upon herself to make sure Twilight recovers fully.

Now that the hidden magic has been unlocked, it proceeds to shake the very foundation on which Ponykind has relied for centuries.

A/N: Those of you who are favoriting or liking this story please leave a comment because I love those. It makes me feel appreciated and not just another 'good author you can follow'

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Comments ( 7 )

Very interesting. I really want to know more about that crystal. Hopefully Twi's ok, and her magical ability doesn't suffer. :applejackunsure: Excited to read more :twilightsmile:

OMG. I need more. Now. :rainbowkiss:

Nurse: Your best friend is about to die

Dash: Welp, better leave her all alone, send a letter to the Princess, then leave the rest of my friends in the dark while I go take a nap.

Really? I mean seriously? You don't need to be the element of loyalty to now that YOU DO NOT LEAVE THAT HOSPITAL UNLESS ABSOLUTELY NECESSARY. Find Spike and send letter? Fine. Gather rest of friends? Probably. Go home and take a nap? FOR THE LOVE OF GOD NO! I understand Celestia waiting until the next day, but I don't give a damn how late it is; the rest of the M6 NEED to know and Dash NEEDS to be there for Twi. All of them do.

Aside from that, interesting start. Writing pretty OK but could use a bit of touching up. found a couple awkward sentences.

yo, mister author man! how long is this story going to be down?

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