The past is the past. Gone forever, untouchable, unchangeable. Accepting this is one of the great struggles of life, but if such a power did exist...
Where else but in temptation are our true values revealed?
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Wow...
That's one hell of a dream...
Well done, mate.
~Skeeter The Lurker
Ooh. This was pretty. An absolutely worthy addition to your pantheon!
Uhm... Wow.
Nicely done.
Sorry, I normally write a review based on how I'm feeling after I've finished reading but... I really don't know.
Have a fave and a follow whilst I try to figure it out.
then
was?
Short, bittersweet, beautiful.
Nice one, dude.
Quite nice. I enjoyed reading this.
One fumbled word I came across:
I... rather found the ending, while not bad, greatly diminished my enjoyment of the story. Which is too bad, it's a well-written ending and I want to like it but the story had me quite excited about something different and that kind of twist rarely fails to disappoint.
Taken individually, the first part and the ending are both excellently crafted, but together they become less enjoyable somehow.
I liked the Cap at the end. I think that waking Celestia might be more inhibited about such thoughts and actions and so I felt a twinge of out-of-characterness from the first half of the story. But the emotional journey of our dreams is another matter entirely. Laying the choice out like that, I might have dramatized it more, but it was decently done for the length.