I wrote this for a "Literature of War" class, and the teacher said it could be as ridiculous as we want. Upon review, I was one of the few to get an A. He told me I should post it to a fanfic site, so I am.
As hinted at by the title, this is a ponified version of the raid on Osama Bin Laden's compound in May 2011. I put in hours of research to make it as accurate as possible, but with, you know, ponies.
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I have no idea what I was expecting from this apart from it being very short and full of puns. A few spelling errors here and there, but props for trying something new.
Nice story, but were you actually allowed to write that in school?
This is utterly ridiculous, and amasses an amount of puns in a military fic that only I've seen myself write. Actually, not even me. You just maximized the amount of puns you could squeeze out of this. Congrats.
i haven't been able to read it all but what little I've read is utterly amazing!you should try another real world to pony world story.
3906655 Was it a punishment to read?
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Nah, I'm a seasoned Pearls Before Swine reader.
And someone on here said it couldnt be done. Ha how id like to see their face after reading this. Well done to this is amazing great work on transporting operation neptune spear into equestria
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Yup! Teachers's daughter watches MLP, and he's pretty laid back.
3906756 Lucky...
The best I've got is a History teacher who makes Doctor Who references in his lessons, that most of the class don't understand.
3906675 Thanks, maybe I should try. I need to think of an event.
3906817 The answer, obviously, is 9/11. Would've been easier if you'd made "Oatsama" a Zebra or goat or something. Could have had them fly a giant chariot or something into buildings in Manehattan and Canterlot.
"About a dozen shells from the VEAL’s 5.56x45 NEIGHTO rounds were recovered."
Should be casings, not shells. Get your shit together.
Other than that though, pretty good.
The puns just killed me in here. Positively glorious.
This story is top tier