For Fluttershy, taking a day off is a blessing; animal care is harder than it looks after all.
Sometimes though, you simply can't catch a break.
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Very sweet!
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How to you read this fast?!
Is there going to be another chapter with the hydra?
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At this point I don't think it's likely. But...You never know.
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No sequel/continuation!? But...
Also, is it strange if this is exactly the way I'd see this playing out?
I wonder if this is still "Slice of Life" or "Adventure". It should be easy to distinguish between those two, but I'm conflicted.
Great story though.
3900758 Comes from years of practice in school! And a timely blog post/signal boost from Steel Resolve!
Okay, this was quite enjoyable.
Two questions.
One. Was it the same manticore from the Nightmare Moon story arc?
Two. Sequel?
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One: Good question.
Two: It wasn't my intention, but... maybe.
Very nice.
I can so easily see Fluttershy doing just that.
(And, six months later, when Ahuizotl's goons decide to rob that timid yellow pegasus on her way back from Zecora's, they get a very nasty surprise...)
I had a hard time finishing this one. It started off well with the abrupt appearance of the manticore, but the rest of the story proceeds at barely even a snail's pace from then on. Picking up supplies and spoon feeding hurt animals just isn't interesting enough to be described in the level of detail that you have here. It's hard to tell what the point of much of it was. Like the long detour with Pinkie Pie. What was the purpose of any of that? Fluttershy picked up the spicy bagels, which at the time seemed like a decent comedy set up: Manticore unwittingly eats spicy bagels>>shenanigans commence. But when the manticore eats them... nothing. Nothing happens at all. He enjoys them then leaves. Yippee? It just feels like there's a lot of wasted words here for what could have been a quick, fun little romp, and also that you're taking [Slice of Life] to an uncomfortable extreme.
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I've long accepted the fact that not everyone is going to like everything I write. It was going to be a little more comedy when I started writing, but I didn't really feel it, and this is what happened. Sorry if you didn't like it.
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I love Sol so this was great for me. it's so calming.
This was really cute. Good slice of life fics can be hard to track down. Bravo
Great story, to short! It needs a sequel! I would have flutters helping other dangerous animals like hydra Medusa maybe even a dragon. I would also like to see the Manti core return.