staring Into the blue Of apples

by Xx soul sorrow xX

Under the apple tree of family

My name's Apple jack and I live on Sweat Apple Acres. I have a sister named Apple bloom and a big brother named Big macentosh and a gramma named granny smith. We live on the farm happily now but we had a tradgic passt. After my work on the farm was done one ssterday after noon, I pondered my life, my friends, my family, and the incidint, it was a stress relief to sit and i like it. i sit their.

When I was born my mom was born with pneumonia but the pus went solid so she died when i was born. I never knew how much i would miss my mom but I do.... She was my mom. she was suppoe to hold me and bath me and keep me from harm and death. But she couldnt even protect herslef from diseas so sad....... But I still had big mc and Apple bloon and granny smith and my dad. My dad was green with a orange mane and his cutie mrk was a tomato. My mom was yellow with a mane that was rad and had orange streeks in it.

Big mac is red and doesn't talk much he can only say Eeup. He has yellow hair. Apple bloom is my little baby sister. She's yellow too just like mom and big mc's hair. She looked just like mom. I miss my mom. She died right after I was born. I cry under the tree of stress relief.

I renember Granma Smith and how she became almost like my mom after she died. Smithee was so kind but now she's old nd depressed. Back then, my dad used to have obsessed compulsive disorder and he always made me and my siblings clean it. Granny yelled at him one day for it and he stmped into his room and Granny was mad. Then the next day, we didn't find him. We couldn't find it and my dad was gone.
"Ye. He's in a better place, Apple jack. Im pretty sure. Dont worry, child. I'll take care of you."
I loved my grandma even though shes old and smells like prunes and is the reaosn my father is gone.
I hug her everyday even though she smells really gross and i think she forgets to brush her teeths so it smell bad.

I kep crying under the tree and Apple bloom came up to me.
"Hey, Apple jack I was sad and I wanted to say hi."
"Oh, Apple bllom, I odnt know what to do anymore. I miss mom and dad."
"Yeah. I miss mom and dad too."
"I remember mom just before she died after i was born."
"Yeah>"
We sat togtehr in silence and cried together but we didnt make a peep. Then Grammy Snith came outside and said, "soups on everpony."
Then apple boom got up and she said. "Are you coming, Apple jack? Its dinner, your fvorite food too."
"No, Im too sad. i said.
"Oh well come on in when you want something to eat."
I didn't want to eat. I wanted to starve forever and I was so sad yeah....
I sat and cried.
Big mac came up and said "Hi apple jack. How are you?"
He talked!!! "Oh big bac i didnt know you could talllkkk!!! :"
"Eup."
I cried on his shoulder. I just needed somebody to lean on. "Yeah I know youre sad but look on the bright side. We have a gamma who loves us so much. All our lives too."
"I know but I still miss em.Can I just be alone now? Granny made dinner."
"Oh okay. I'll go. Bye.
Then he walked to the fabarn house and he was gone and I was alone once again.

Author's Note:

Hey this my new stry it was editd by EgoreFrimzCud. But she tot me a little bit about writing stories so im getting better now. So maybe i can right a story and it will get aproved!!!!!!!
Thx for suportt keep it coiming with the comments. Thx ??!!!!!!!!!

Oh and cover art is by kittykat67 friend from school. All of my friends are from scool.

Comments

[GabladeRunner]

I really don't want to be that guy, but you might just want to consider running this through a more renowned editor. I shouldn't be one to speak, as I haven't completed my first piece yet, but even if you send it out to someone for simple spelling fixes, the story would be enhanced greatly.

Sorry if I'm being rude, or I'm completely missing the memo on something!