• Member Since 13th Jan, 2014
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Dovakiin


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War... War never changes... and neither does friendship.
the mane 6 are greeted by a nuclear war between Equestria and the Humans, resulting in a Fallout. How will they survive in the wastelands now known as the Equestrian wastes?
well... thats for you to find out...
I changed the name due to comments.
btw im new to this so so stop hating. Feel free to, but not too harshly. I know I have bad grammar and im trying my best. I am truly sorry for any inconvenience.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 23 )

Rather short chapters, I know and im sorry. Ive been caught up in work, lately.
Sorry
-Bilbo Swaggins

Dude. It's been done.

This is Australia...

You might want to change the title, since there's already a very popular series by this name.

Just saying.

I refuse to believe that you managed to rip-off the title of possibly the most popular MLP fanfic of all time and not realise it.

I don't recall seeing too many ripoffs of other ripoffs before. Huh. Seems like that would somehow cancel things out in a paradoxical manner.

Regardless, you might wanna change that title as well. I see you're already catching some flak and that negative reception is only going to get worse and worse as this goes on.

She said, pulling the trigger.

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How is that even supposed to be physically possible?
Unless, of course, the anthro tag just happened to slip under my radar.

Seriously, I just found a plothole the size of freaking Betelgeuse.
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Well... I do have to say...

DID THE GRAMMAR JUST GET WORSE IN THIS CHAPTER COMPARED TO THE PREVIOUS ONE!?
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I can't take it. I, I just can't take it

uh... change the title... like, now. Fallout: Equestria is taken and it's guaranteed to be better than this because of how downright fucking amazing the ACTUAL Fallout: Equestria is. I don't care how much you want to keep the title, it's taken and it's taken by a REALLY REALLY REALLY popular story, so just deal with the fact that you need to change it and fucking change it. I hate to be like this, but Fallout: Equestria (the REAL one) is a fucking masterpiece, so just change this one's title to something else that doesn't have Fallout: Equestria in the name.

Please change the title of this story. The name "Fallout: Equestria" is only used when the story takes place in the existing Fallout: Equestria universe.

You're going to constantly receive downvotes as long as you keep the title, no matter what the quality of the story is.

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I just reported the story. There is no possible way he cannot know about the original Fallout Equestria. To try and claim otherwise is a load of shit the size of New York.

3956626 It's not unthinkable at all. It's unlikely, sure, but absolutely possible. If you haven't been an active member of the fan community for a while, you can easily not know about a fanfic from 2011.

The name "Fallout: Equestria" itself is also very easy to come up with. It's based directly on the "Fallout: [Location]" naming pattern from the game series ("Fallout: New Vegas").

I'm, like, 90% sure that the author knows of FO:E and named this fic deliberately, but I'd rather be amicable in case I'm wrong.

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Given the attention the fic got outside of the fanfic community, I find that hard to believe. Songs, animations, artwork... It just isn't that feasible to not be aware of it peripherally.

I've down voted this fic...I'm actually saying this because not only is it using the name of a pre-exsisting story, but because its so badly written, characters acting out of character, and presented in a bad way (line breaks man; LINE BREAKS! No massive one-paragraph layouts).:pinkiegasp:

As for stories with the same title, before presenting anything a quick search of the sight for the same name. It's just polite. Back in college I was creating a comic for an independent art study and wanted to use a particular title for my comic. Turns out someone else was already using it, so I changed it. :twilightangry2:

Well to play Devil's Advocate, the dude's only been a member for like a month, and who knows? Maybe he never explored MLP Fanfiction before then.

I know a lot of bronies who don't know about popular stories, except for infamous ones like Cupcakes.

A few things to note.

1. I changed the title.
2. I had NO Idea that there was a popular 'Fallout: Equestria'
3. Im not a brony nor pegasister.
4. Sorry for grammar problems
5. I may have access to a PC Soon.
6. Dont go hating too much
7. Ive only been here for a month
8.im new to MLP. It was introduced to me by a friend on December.
9. Sorry for any inconvenience and damage to brain cells while reading my stories.

~Bilbo Swaggins

While I appreciate the fact that you did not ignore the requests (or demands, should I say) to change the name of the story, it might be better if you were to take out the "Equestria" and just call it "Fallout: Equestrian Wastes." That way it can be very distinguished from the original Fallout: Equestria series and it's many spinoffs.

Changed the name YET again.

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2. I had NO Idea that there was a popular 'Fallout: Equestria'

Sure bro.

3961447 Here, let me help you. Let me reconsider your thoughts about not writing stories anymore, with pros and cons. You don't have to read this, but I'm trying to help you out.

1) Your new here? Well then considered this as a brony, as you were enthusiast by other authors. I have to say that writing this story took guts. But, Wacky's right, this...this was terrible. But don't worry!! Everyone may not start off as a popular writer, but you can learn from others. Maybe watch the shows or read others stories a little better to understand more and become a better writer!

2) Try a different idea! This story was...not so great, so try a different idea!! Maybe they discover a human or they discover technology, but don't give up! Everyone who fails at writing give up on the spot. Don't be that person! You can try again, get back on your feet, and let your imagination run wild!!

3) Last, but not least, Try as much as you can!! If your story isn't that great, than redo it, or edit it if you have to, but add enough detail to get your reader going!

Well, hope this reconsiders your idea on writing, but try a different story than this one if you want too. Please, take care, and have an awesome life.

~LikeaBaws :moustache:

3961447 I like your story.  Why does it have down votes?

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I'll be honest, I had the same problem skills as the author; however, for some reason, people actually liked my story, but it was banned because of the script. My second attempt at writing a story began pretty well... But, I don't know, I've lost interest and creativity in doing it. Now, in the end, I'm writing the 3rd story, I consider it my attempt to get a "REDEMPTION". I won't stop until I finally get it.

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