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A pool boy by trade. A rocker at heart. A writer by soul. And not afraid to show my face.

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Some of the greatest powers in Equestria gather in Twilight's library, and they are all certain of one thing.

She will fail.

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oh my gosh XD that was so hilarious! i was expecting something else, at the end. but this was just. ermahgerd that was hilarious! lmao man. lmao... (yes. i am an immature idiot on a website for writing fictional stories about a little girl show. you might just call me a brony) (i am one.)

Great job, man.

Twilight said quite annoyed.

Twilight said, quite annoyed.

lesbian-y

Lesbian-ish?

"but we all know you're going to fail."

"But we all know you're going to fail."

So. Much. What! :rainbowderp: :rainbowlaugh:

dabuq did I just read? Seriously? This is soooo random. :rainbowwild: I want to know how all this came to be. Why did she need to go so bad? Why wasn't she already on the toilet? Why is Discord there? Is he why Celestia is acting so strange? Is he the cause of all of this? Why the hell is Sombra even in existence, and the most important question I could ever possibly ask about this: WHAT??? :rainbowhuh: :rainbowhuh: :rainbowhuh: :rainbowhuh: :rainbowhuh:

This was thoroughly enjoyable, by the way. :pinkiehappy: :derpytongue2:

"Potty!!! Now!!" she screamed.

Art.

3897577 All fixed!:twilightsmile:

Not even twilight can be able to pass it.

I am so (insert emotion here, because am so (insert emotion here) that I don't even know what emotion it is) that I gave this a like.

:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

This was seriously freakin' hilarious! Favourited and liked :pinkiesmile:

3966349 I hope you weren't put up to this. But I thank you, regardless.

3966360 Why would I be put up to this? :rainbowhuh:

3966364 I have my own reasons for believing that. I will return the favor.

3966371 No, you don't have to return the favor. I liked this story; it was really funny. I therefore enjoyed it and favorited it, and I don't need a returning favorite or anything. You're a really good writer, so I don't understand why you would think you don't deserve my follow. I follow you because you're cool. Very cool.

3966379 You and I both know very well that's not true. Besides, I return the favor to those who I believe deserve it; so whether or not you want me to, I will.

3966406 You may think that, but I don't. I think you're really cool, honestly. See, I've got my AJ :ajsmug: on. I'm obviously being genuine here, because, you know, Applejack's pretty awesome. And honest. Very honest.

Oh right, back on track. Yeah, you deserved my follow. Yeah, you're cool. No, I don't think you are a bad writer. You're a great writer. I think that, and you should too.

3966429 mfw you said I'm a great writer.

i.imgur.com/ZG3P1dk.gif

Likewise; I think the same of you.

Thank you.

3966514 You really are. This was really good story, and it made me laugh. That is quite the accomplishment, in my terms. Good job :pinkiesmile:

3966547 I will fulfill my end, for my friends that is. And my name isn't Carl.

3966563 I know. To me, everyone is Carl.

Everyone. is. Carl.


There is no escaping the Carl syndrome.

:yay:

3966566 I escape it.

My name is Connor.

3966575 Dang it! Connor has done the inevitable... and escaped. :pinkiegasp:

I had to read the entire story twice and the final three or four times to understand what was going on. Upvoted.

WWHHAAAAATTT???!!! I like the minor TwiDash included.

4040399 Another satisfied customer! :twilightsmile:

I.. I don't... I can't... is there even an appropriate reaction to this? I don't think so... I really, really don't...

Imma... Imma go and... uh... do the thing now... by....

*upvoted*

Okay, let me phrase this in the most sophisticated, civilized way I possibly can:

WHAT.

You story has been reviewed by the Pleasant Commentator And Review Group!

"Look homegirl," said Celestia, "You need to chill, seriously. No pupil of mine is going to be so angry in her failures. You need to embrace them, even though I myself have no idea what it's like to fail at something."

Cough... cough... Canterlot Wedding... cough... cough.

Also, stopping your saister becoming Nightmare Moon, stopping her again when she returned, stopping Discord from walking off with the Elements, stopping Sombra, not getting abducted by freaky vines...

Trust me, by now you're an expert.

Reads story: :derpytongue2:

Reads comments: :rainbowlaugh:

Also, Twilight, since you failed to get to the toilet, you must pass the 5 Trials of Worth.

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...Care to explain it to the rest of us?

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