• Member Since 28th Apr, 2013
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AliceA020


An average girl who writes stories and is always willing to make new friends.

Comments ( 12 )

Errors:
Don't day that.
And
Off her bag

Well this certainly gave me the warm and fuzzies. there were a few grammatical errors, but not enough to detract from the over all story. All and all this was pretty good. Have a mustache :moustache:

The first story with feels that didn't leave me feeling depressed! Excellent work!

“Oh, Scoots, don’t day that,”

Rainbow Dash must have a terrible cold.

:pinkiehappy: So touching... :fluttercry:

A deadly cocktail of feels and dawwws.
*dies before he can say anything else*
"Why did you kill him?" :fluttercry:

Aaaaawwhhh :pinkiesad2: this was sos sweet I loves it

The character development seems exactly the same as in "Flight to the finish".

Screw that, still loved it. :moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache: out of ten, one past the maximum. Da feeels!

So at the beginning I thought the picture would be scootaloo flying solo or with rainbow, but then rainbows and scoots friends reactions to it made me think it was her kissing rainbow. Why did rainbow and the other cmc have such odd reactions to the picture? Maybe rainbow already knew that scoots couldn't fly, but why were applebloom and sweetish belle also hesitant about it? Just seemed like such an odd reaction to an innocuous drawing.

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