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Rainbow Reshiram


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Reshiram and Zekrom end up in Equestria via Sonic Rainboom and are transformed into Alicorn Ponies! While getting used to the change, making new friends and deciding whether or not they want to leave Equestria, an evil arises in Canterlot. Reshiram and Zekrom are dragged along by none other than Twilight Sparkle and her friends to Equestria's capitol per request of Her Highness Princess Celestia. Will they aid Twilight and her friends in saving Equestria?


Takes place during The Return of Harmony. Cover art drawn by me. (Though I might make a better version in the future.)
MY FIRST STORY!! :3
Yes, the chapters may be kind of short, but I hope you still like it! I'm proud of it, at least.

Alternate Universe because it's just The Return of Harmony with Reshiram and Zekrom along for the ride, and some events may be a little different than cannon. *SPOILERS* Oh, and Discord flirts with Reshiram. Oh my. *END OF SPOILERS* (That's one of the only bits of romance in this, so I didn't feel the need to use the tag.)

ENJOY!! :3

Chapters (12)
Comments ( 49 )

my first thought: "why would two lengendaries turn into alicorns?" and then i remembered that's kinda what we do when we go to equestria. we turn into alicorns. haha maybe i should actually read this

LONGER CHAPTERS ASSHOLE THIS STORY IS THE ONLY GOOD POKEMON CROSSOVER BUT UR CHAPTERS R TOO SHORT

3956994 Now, now, calm down boy, no need for full- caps rage on such trivial matters when he clearly stated he only wanted constructive criticism, not raging criticism. Although your point stands, I calmly agree that longer chapters could possibly be more beneficial to everyone following this story and perhaps prevent this from happening again. I'll still read your story wether you choose to agree on this matter or not, frankly I don't care; for it is the story that counts, not the chapter lengths correct? Anyway, enough rambling, I personally enjoy this story greatly and wish for you to continue it. May the Universe not shit on thee
-TSW

Alright, I admit it, I had doubts aboutthis story, but now that I've read through what you've got here, I must say, I'm genuinely impressed with you; you managed to capture Discord's character flawlessly (in my opinion anyway) and you managed to work in an excellent mystery concerning how the two legendaries wound up in Equestria. I look forward to the resolution you have for the story, I really do!

you know who i thought reshiram would get along with as in best friends? applejack. because reshiram is truth. and applejack is honesty. same thing.:pinkiehappy:

Comment posted by ThePatcher deleted Feb 23rd, 2014
Comment posted by ThePatcher deleted Feb 23rd, 2014

man Discord! you think you could trick Reshiram JUST-LIKE-THAT!? :flutterrage: SHAME ON YOU DISCORD!!! SHAME ON YOU!!!

UPDATE PLEASE!!!!! :fluttershysad: ONE OF THE BEST STORIES I'VE READ IN MY LIFE SO PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE!!!!:flutterrage:

No bro u can't end it like this :trixieshiftleft: u should at least say that's reshiram and zekrom get together duh.:facehoof:

And u should make a sequel with reshiram and zekrom having foals if u do decide that they get together. Good story though

make sequel.....NOW!!!:flutterrage:.......please:twilightsheepish:

PLEASE IF YOU MAKE A SEQUEL THEN PLEASE HAVE RESHIRAM AND ZEKROM HAVE A FOAL AND THAT FOAL IS KYRUEM! PLEEAASSSEEE!!!!! also, a OC if you want.:twilightblush: make the sequel with Kyruem as reshi and zekrom's foal, and you get :moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache: moustaches, and :heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart: hearts. thank you! :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

3912860 My question is: why wouldn't two legendaries turn into Alicorns? Especially ones of near-divine status like members of the Tao Trio? It'd be weirder if they turned into something else!

3912860 This comment is the EXACT reason I'm gonna read this. I wasn't sure, but now that I've read this, I'm reading the story

This story was amazing. I loved it!!

BAD DISCORD! NO CRUSHING ON RESHIRAM! CAUSE I WANT THIS TO HAPPEN!

Reshiram + Zekrom = Kyruem

... SHUT UP!

BAD DISCORD! NO CRUSHING ON RESHIRAM! CAUSE I WANT THIS TO HAPPEN!

Reshiram + Zekrom = Kyruem

... SHUT UP!

XD

Applejack: uh... Chocolate Milk?

i kinda like this applejack!

God dammit. Way too many cliffhangers. It makes the chapters really short. I mean, I am only 12 and I always write 1000+ words per chapter (unless it is a message, like going on hiatus)!:fluttershysad:
Nonetheless, it's still a good story! :pinkiehappy:

My ratings (out of five):
Chapter size: :yay::yay:
Plot: :yay::yay::yay:
?: ?
Need for a sequel: :flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage:

Celestia's mane has 4 colours, not 3. That would be 'quad-coloured mane' :twilightsmile:

3956994

The only good one? Have you TRIED looking for at other stories?! For example, "A New World, A New Way" is one of the best and LONGEST Pokemon/MLP crossover fics out there.

3912860 The legendaries are basically gods in their own rights. Though I think Reshi would be a better pegasus.

3923003 Hmhp Why ya gotta be so rude to him.... He's such a nice guy.

6127894 Truth and honesty are two different things, if similar. Honesty is telling the truth, truth is what is... well, true. One's an action, the other is a concept.

You should do Discord vs Zygarde...ya know, Chaos vs Order

"Reshiram is one of the many Pokemon creatures. She resides in the Unova region and is classified as a Dragon-Fire type Pokemon. She is one of the rare and powerful Legendary Pokemon and is said to aid a hero who believes in the truth when the need arises."

The book showed a picture of a white dragon-like creature, furry rather than scaly. A hoofnote was next to the picture. It said, "See also: Zekrom, page 342"

Twilight turned to the page. It seemed that this "Zekrom" was associated with Reshiram in the myths and stories. It was all very interesting and strange to Twilight. A million questions ran through her head like bullet trains. Could the Reshiram she met be the one described in the book? How did she turn into a pony? Why did she turn into a pony? Was Zekrom also in Equestria somehow, since he and Reshiram are connected? If so, did Zekrom also turn into a pony? Twilight was growing exited at the thought of finding answers to these questions and more, but she tried to stay calm. It was almost lunchtime, and she was going to meet up with Pinkie Pie for lunch. She will have to pick up the research again later.

Also,
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Fantastic story. I give it 8/10 on the :yay:itude meter for two little problems (aside from occasional grammar flaws. BTW, if you need a proofreader for any future stories, PM me.).

1: after discovering that they still have their powers, it essentially serves as Chekov's Gun from that point on.

2: After receiving the two new elements.... you NEVER tell us what elements those ARE!

Aside from that, very good story.

I loved it. 7.5/10. Well done.

as much as i liked the story the whole thing seemed a bit rushed maybe you can have a epilogue about what happens after the story for a more complete ending

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Go Reshiram!
Go Zekrom!
[Player] threw a Master Ball!

Discord looked up from the glass of chocolate milk he was drinking. He finished drinking the glass, then threw the solidified chocolate milk over his shoulder, causing a small explosion somewhere. He then looked at Reshiram in surprise.

Explosive chocolate milk

"EXCUSE me, Princess, I just wanted to get to know our two new guests." Discord replied. "It's vital for our game."

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