After spending a drunken night with Rainbow Dash, Ryan heads back to work at a small Candyshop in the center of Ponyville. But little does he know the one night stand quickly proves to be a little more involved.
I would like it if Rainbow don´t get her chance so easy. I don´t remember every detail right now, but i would like it if Rainbow maybe get the chance to talk with him and maybe Fluttershy or Twilight at her side about it. I mean if i remember it right it is a Pegasus thing right? and Twilight now neary everything about everything correct?
I just say it because i think i would not like it if Rainbow just start begging again and he said suddenly yes, but i think maybe she got the message last time. (I just had read again the short scene with Fluttershy and him) And because the fact that i think he don´t want it either, it would be weird if he suddenly like the idea to date her. Maybe a emotional talk with sompony as the helpfull (observer?) (don´t remember the right word right now)
I like the story, it looked like they were ready to go to bed together and suddenly Lyra appeares and ruined the fun
4843295 Ok one you are wrong it is not self promotion, if it was that means I would have wrote the stories. Two you don't have to check these out I'm simply giving the options. Three there is no need to curse at me. And to finish this off. Four last time I checked there was no regulations or rules any where that says I can't give options for other stories to readers hoping to find a decent story, also I live in the south part of MURICA where if you AINT caught doing it then it's legal.
1. I live in Florida, that's the farthest South you can be in the USA, and stop making other Americans look retarded with that stupid "merica" shit. 2. That has absolutely nothing to do with the fact that you can or can't break rules, don't be stupid. 3. Linking to your own blogs and/or stories on someone else's stories and saying "hey, you guys should totally check this out if you want" is the DEFINITION of self-promotion. 4. I didn't have to curse, but I can if I want. 5. I'll let the author deal with you, I just hate self-promoters.
4843319 Even where not against the rules, it's considered extremely impolite to advertise other stories on a story's comments.
I live in the south part of MURICA where if you AINT caught doing it then it's legal.
Oh my god. This is so stupid I can't even.
(Also, if you like, I can make sure you're caught. Screencapped the posts in case you think it'd be funny to delete them... though moderators can see them anyway.)
Making deals or trading favors for upvotes/favorites is not something we allow on this site. Neither is unsolicited story promotion of any kind on someone else's story.
4843324 cool welcome to South Texas the actual furthest south you can get. Cool, awesome I still know my rights which include the freedom of speech. I'm sure your familiar with that one. Also you say I make us as Americans look retarded. We only brought this on ourselves for acting like retards. People are so "patriotic" that during WWI, 12 men beat a single man to death because he was deaf and couldn't hear the pledge start so he didn't stand in respect. Wow talk about thinking straight and using common sense. I'm sorry I can't hear anything, oh what would you 12 gentlemen like. next thing this man knew was happening he was getting brutally murdered by the hands and feet of 12 "patriotic" men. Also 4843336 "Caught" what am I going to get caught for? I have done nothing wrong so I won't be caught for anything. I respect that both of you don't like this form of advertisement but I promised I would do everything to help them so I decided why not. If anything you two should be caught for harassing a fellow reader and/or author
4843292 I respect this statement, If people actually talked like civilized people this world would be a much better place, but no we gotta act like animals.
4843377 Freedom of speech means the government can't arrest you for what you say. That's it. That's all it means.
I am not the US government. Fimfiction is not America. This is a privately-owned website. Citing the Constitution doesn't get you anywhere because you don't have any Constitutional rights on this site. Using Fimfiction is a privilege, and if you post promotional spam you're going to get yourself banned in pretty short order.
oh im so interested in this story. I really need another chapter of this.
Also, I have an idea of a story similar to yours. I wanted to at least let you know before I write it. Don't worry, It will be all new content, however, It will be inspired mostly by this story. You okay with that?
Andy and Ryan's ... interaction reminded me A LOT of that one sketch in the Asdf movies. - "YOU WANNA TAKE THIS OUTSIDE?!" "YEAH!" -zwip- "WOW, WHAT A LOVELY EVENING!" "THIS WAS A REALLY GOOD IDEA!"
The dialogue between Andy and Ryan was fucking glorious, it was just so classy!
suddenly lyra i for see a possibility for a 3some
4838345 <------this is my reaction too about that part
Yay, Lyra's in this now!
I swear to God, if you don't make a fic for Andy I'm going to pummel you. Or is there one already..? Ima go check.
I feel like Andy and Ryan could become bros.
I would like it if Rainbow don´t get her chance so easy. I don´t remember every detail right now, but i would like it if Rainbow maybe get the chance to talk with him and maybe Fluttershy or Twilight at her side about it. I mean if i remember it right it is a Pegasus thing right? and Twilight now neary everything about everything correct?
I just say it because i think i would not like it if Rainbow just start begging again and he said suddenly yes, but i think maybe she got the message last time. (I just had read again the short scene with Fluttershy and him) And because the fact that i think he don´t want it either, it would be weird if he suddenly like the idea to date her. Maybe a emotional talk with sompony as the helpfull (observer?) (don´t remember the right word right now)
I like the story, it looked like they were ready to go to bed together and suddenly Lyra appeares and ruined the fun
I SWAYRE TA FUCKIN' GOD IF YA DONT PUT N' MORE DIALOUGE B'TWEEN RYAN N' ANDY ILL PUNCH YA INTO NEX WEEK!
Great chapter.
4843273
I suggest you remove that blatant self promotion from this page before I remove it by force and report you for spam.
4843273 What the fuck is this self promotion bullshit
Go attention whore somewhere else, or gain your followers by actually fucking trying
4843295 Ok one you are wrong it is not self promotion, if it was that means I would have wrote the stories. Two you don't have to check these out I'm simply giving the options. Three there is no need to curse at me. And to finish this off. Four last time I checked there was no regulations or rules any where that says I can't give options for other stories to readers hoping to find a decent story, also I live in the south part of MURICA where if you AINT caught doing it then it's legal.
4843319
1. I live in Florida, that's the farthest South you can be in the USA, and stop making other Americans look retarded with that stupid "merica" shit.
2. That has absolutely nothing to do with the fact that you can or can't break rules, don't be stupid.
3. Linking to your own blogs and/or stories on someone else's stories and saying "hey, you guys should totally check this out if you want" is the DEFINITION of self-promotion.
4. I didn't have to curse, but I can if I want.
5. I'll let the author deal with you, I just hate self-promoters.
4843319
Even where not against the rules, it's considered extremely impolite to advertise other stories on a story's comments.
Oh my god. This is so stupid I can't even.
(Also, if you like, I can make sure you're caught. Screencapped the posts in case you think it'd be funny to delete them... though moderators can see them anyway.)
4843319 Welp, it's a shame you got caught, then.
Making deals or trading favors for upvotes/favorites is not something we allow on this site. Neither is unsolicited story promotion of any kind on someone else's story.
Don't do this again.
4843324 cool welcome to South Texas the actual furthest south you can get. Cool, awesome I still know my rights which include the freedom of speech. I'm sure your familiar with that one. Also you say I make us as Americans look retarded. We only brought this on ourselves for acting like retards. People are so "patriotic" that during WWI, 12 men beat a single man to death because he was deaf and couldn't hear the pledge start so he didn't stand in respect. Wow talk about thinking straight and using common sense. I'm sorry I can't hear anything, oh what would you 12 gentlemen like. next thing this man knew was happening he was getting brutally murdered by the hands and feet of 12 "patriotic" men.
Also
4843336 "Caught" what am I going to get caught for? I have done nothing wrong so I won't be caught for anything. I respect that both of you don't like this form of advertisement but I promised I would do everything to help them so I decided why not. If anything you two should be caught for harassing a fellow reader and/or author
4843377
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You should read Eldorado's post. It's kinda important.
4843292 I respect this statement, If people actually talked like civilized people this world would be a much better place, but no we gotta act like animals.
4843377 i.imgur.com/Ca7EvXh.png
Wow it's almost like Florida is further South at the lowest point. Get good scrub.
4843384
Don't kiss up to me...best you ignore these comments and just leave until I forget your name.
4843377 Freedom of speech means the government can't arrest you for what you say. That's it. That's all it means.
I am not the US government. Fimfiction is not America. This is a privately-owned website. Citing the Constitution doesn't get you anywhere because you don't have any Constitutional rights on this site. Using Fimfiction is a privilege, and if you post promotional spam you're going to get yourself banned in pretty short order.
So maybe you should stop or something I dunno
4843377 ...the site's based in another country anyway, ya dangus.
oh im so interested in this story. I really need another chapter of this.
Also, I have an idea of a story similar to yours. I wanted to at least let you know before I write it. Don't worry, It will be all new content, however, It will be inspired mostly by this story. You okay with that?
4845340
I don't mind.
We need more of this. Great writing as always Hat.
4845919 Hey hat, is Andy a bomb?
Andy and Ryan's ... interaction reminded me A LOT of that one sketch in the Asdf movies.
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"YOU WANNA TAKE THIS OUTSIDE?!"
"YEAH!"
-zwip-
"WOW, WHAT A LOVELY EVENING!"
"THIS WAS A REALLY GOOD IDEA!"
5112330
Human interactions can be weird like that, if not more so.
4851344
Ah haha, just like in Red vs Blue...
Silly Lyra! That's Pinkie's tactic! It only works when SHE does it!