After spending a drunken night with Rainbow Dash, Ryan heads back to work at a small Candyshop in the center of Ponyville. But little does he know the one night stand quickly proves to be a little more involved.
You know Ryan seems like the stereotypical worker. Just in it for the money and nothing else. Though Rainbow had some Daww moments here... thats always good.
I loved this chapter it was funny. I hope Dash is going to be ok this was a good read. And the part with Ditzy Doo was cute. I cant wait to see what happens next between them all next and what happens next to them all.
It seems there will be troubling times ahead.
Got a good start on here.
Consider this fav'd.
Hmm... a candy shop in ponyville. What could possibly go wrong?
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No, he's the protagonist of ivory
You know Ryan seems like the stereotypical worker. Just in it for the money and nothing else.
Though Rainbow had some Daww moments here... thats always good.
The plot thickens...
(singing) He's got a stalker! He's got a stalker!
Looks like someone is obsessed...
The MC kinda reminds me of Vince.
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Well...the preludes a flash forward...I guess I need to start saying that...
I wait
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I'll be updating each of the Ivory sequels throughout the week. I'm aiming for one - two updates per story, per week.
3923736 Cool, I don't remember commenting and I work up with to a migraine, but cool
Best cure for hangover isn't more alcohol (never), it's fat breakfast. Eggs, bacon, sausages! Proven scientifically and personally.
4470911 nah, an IV works better then again I've had dozens of em
I've liked almost all the stories you've written. This one is the most recent cursing/drunken/sex stories I've read from you.
i WISH dash would leech on to me like that. guy doesnt realize how lucky he is :L
This sounds like a case of sexual imprinting. Ironic, since it only occurs in several species of birds.
I loved this chapter it was funny. I hope Dash is going to be ok this was a good read. And the part with Ditzy Doo was cute. I cant wait to see what happens next between them all next and what happens next to them all.
Ah. Guess that answers my question from last chapter.
I'd describe this chapter blurry. I can't get the details of whatever is happening.
4470911 don't forget chugging water to help flush the toxins and rehydrate. Dehydration and toxins are the main cause of the headache and nausea.