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I wield the might Uber Swagger Stick of first!
Harsh. Dark. Depressing. But very good. Now I can better understand his reaction after getting out of Stable with BJ. Also, fucking Daisy. What a bitch... though it hard not to be, if you're in 99.
434720 Glad to hear you liked it. The Daisy scene could have been more "detailed" as said, (I'm sure you noticed a few "sparse" parts) but they were kinda hard to write for me ^^'
Just out of curiosity if you wouldn't mind: What did you think of the other characters in it?
Lets get this some attention eh? <3
435241 I could likely have done that by posting it on a better day xP But should I take it as you've read it then?
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Well...Pepper I liked the most. Saner one here. Not very hard on P-1, explains everything, kinda forgiving... and she did 'helped' him skip his queue. Tripped him down the stairs, yeah, but still.
Medical mare is fucked up. But helpful. Second best for me. Yes, she scares me and it sick to pretend... but at least P-1 got some pleasure and rest. Plus books.
Daisy, well, crazy sadictic bitch. Don't know what more to tell.
Good story in fact. Pushed my horizons of fucked-up-ness and made me realize my job isn't that bad.
Can't really understand why people might dislike it. :3
Only one moment: "It almost felt like it would burst like a ripe fruit" - where had he seen ripe fruits in a stable, that had been recycling stuff for 200 years?
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Not yet but I plan to once I've got some food inside me.
I'm annoyingly bad when it comes to focus and reading when put together - if its not something I -HAVE- to do or something I just love the fuck out of (like P.H) then I need to meet requirements otherwise my mind rolls off half way through.
And because I absolutely adore you, I'd rather not risk insulting your work like that :) so soon. once I have my mind in one place at least.
435398 Heh, glad to hear you liked it.
And well, rape stuff is generally looked down upon, and so is FoE. So many downvotes is from people that don't read it, just look at what it contains, then downvote. Same went for my Trixie fic. Quite a few people hated on it without knowing what it contained.
And that is a rather good point... books I could assume, or there might be some fungus like stuff growing down there xD
435382 Thanks for your opinion.
Pepper is mostly based of me, but with an extra layer of "fucked up" to fit the stable more hehe. I liked her enough to add that third chapter to, at least momentarily, save her heh. Even if it was attempted in a mixed layer of "Pepper style" and "FoE gloom".
Glad to know medical mare managed to give a creepy feeling. She was based a bit on the "delusional one", kinda like the one in my Soarin fic. But with slightly more sanity and depth.
And Daisy was well... Daisy, perhaps turned up a notch but... the story needed a "bad guy". Technically the overmare would've sufficed, but she lacked the "build" for it.
435591 Okay. Sounds like a plan.
And no worries, I'm kinda similar myself, I got many ranks, focus and talents in procrastinating xD
No offence, but would prefer if you read it before you praised it haha. I wouldn't think any less of you if you disliked it. After all, it's not for everyone ;P
Still, it needs to be gotten out there.
I HAZ FAITH IN YOUUUUUUU
You see? I'm a kind bastard, a strange and unpredictable bastard, but kind none the less.
435672 I guess that makes sense... xD
Really like how it shows the fucked up way stable 99 worked, you cant really feel it from just PH ,but here my hand stayed close to my crotch ( subconsciously trying to protect it, dont think anyone would get off from reading this? )
Didnt read your other works, but decided to read this simply because the topic of male rape just fits with Sombers fic.
Mostly skipped this last chapter except the conversations, mostly because its tiring to read 26k words in one go, for me at least.
440228 Fak, FiMFiction messed up a bit and ate my reply. Trying to re-write it: Thanks, glad you liked/enjoyed it. I tried to bring out as much of the likely atmosphere of 99 as I could. And I'd sadly have to reply with "If it exists, it's someone's fetish"
And yeah, I was trying to add some male rape to "balance" it out between the large amount of female rape I'd seen popping up over the fandom. First made "Sore in the Night", and halfway through that, after many difficult decisions of whom to have as a victim, why and whom would do the deed, I realized I had a perfect victim in front of me the whole time, even story wise he was canon to have been raped.
And I can see that, it was mostly just closure about 2/3 of the mares that used him in this fic for those interested. And this is my longest work so far I think. Oh, and while at it, if you wouldn't mind, I'd like to know what you thought of the characters, and what scene had the most impact on you.
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Yeah i read all on fim.413 ,the thread you have there (and remember the discussion in the Zebra Rape fic thread , or some other)
I liked how its a mix of one "extreme" to the other, Pepper in the middle but still having her fetish and showing that while she doesn't think of them as just pieces of meat she still has no issues using them for her gain.(hard not to do that when all your life your taught that's how its supposed to be)
Medical mare has a daddy issue (wheres a pony version of Barney Stinson hiding?) or something probably, wanting P to call her a good girl, but still liked her the most. Dont know what would have happened if he didnt play along with her but at least it wasn't anything fucked up, just words. And she did try her best to make him feel good. Its not her fault that shes forced into something she cant do to good.
And i didnt enjoy it ,but you dont have to enjoy something to still like it.
443436 I recall quite a few threads there, not the exact details, but most of it :P
Was a bit tempted to do a "reply" to the zebra rape fic, but eh. It wouldn't really cover anything my other fics hadn't, and lacked what little story my other things have xP
And thanks for your review/opinion(?) on this, appreciate it. Curious to know if I managed to do it properly.
And I guess that's true, I just don't really know the difference tbh xD
An excellent, grim look into the life of a male of Stable 99, and its sole surviving male. Some may find the subject matter offensive and disgusting but in this context and the way you've written it, this is justified and even morbidly funny in some parts. It's sad to think that these poor colts lived their entire lives in this hell, and that Blackjack was a part of this horrific system but didn't even realise it until she escaped.
1004138 Glad you liked it. I tried to represent the grim life of a 99 male, or stallions in the wasteland overall. They're really overlooked victims imo. (and mostly only used as "the bad guys") With the wasteland and gender rations, the amount of males raped would be approximate to the amount of females. (did a quick, inaccurate research into it) I got another work in the making, started several chapters back before Psycho was part of the group, so unlike this, it will very most likely be unable to be "canon"-ish. xP
I had plans to do the initial scene between P-21 and BJ, but thought it was better if I avoided it. Anyhow, thanks for reading, and as said, if you liked, will be trying to release the other one within a month. Just need proofreader and all that usual stuff.
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Well I'd be happy to proofread it :3 I consider myself a good editor
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From what I recall, it's 20+ k words... or is it letters? One of them xD It's like a long PH chapter, but with mostly rape, murder and ... Psychoshy heh. Got a short side-story or intro or something that's ready to be read though. Not sure where to have it, but it's done, and unrelated to the Psycho story, but will likely be tossed in there for whatever reason. I can send you what I got so far, or the finished one or whatever if you'd like me to. Might get some done later today if I manage to finish another semi-quick project I stumbled into.
That'd be lovely. Got around 85 % done so far. It's way more fucked up than this one though.
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Sure thing, you can send it to me as a big pm if you like or uploadi t to a googledoc :3
Are you going to make more fallout related clopfics??
6627423 It's kinda doubtful, but possibly.
I am in charge of making the PH revision. But I need to give that an overhaul as I trailed off... it won't be any clopfic per se, but it will fix basically every single sex scene to be less stupid and/or OOC. Along with replace the movie zombies with fallout ghouls. But yeah, I did fuck up some in that and trail off with what I was doing, so I gotta revamp it. Only focusing on what I was supposed to do.
Terribly dark and disgusting, but well explained. Great work!
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Was kinda the point of it.
As no-one else seemingly dared to explore it.
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This was the first story when someone searches relevance with out any words or tags in the search bar
Date:September 5, 2019
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That... seems rather weird.