I'm a go playing brony who reads and writes fan fiction works. That's about all you need to know.
Twilight creates a spell that should allow anypony to experience an amazing 24 hour day in the span of about an hour. She wants to test out a lighter version that should give her a 5 minute experience in a few seconds to make sure the spell is safe. After a successful test, however, she is worried that it might have actually worked better than expected...
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I have no quarrel with this story.
More fantasies please
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Hopefully my next story, More About Time, will be to your liking.
Haha Ive got a feeling Timemaster will have a blast reading that one!
Excellent story, by the way! Keep these up, they're so much better than the plot I find regularly.
This story was very entertaining! Have a like and fav.
I think the story would have been better WITHOUT the ending with her wondering if she was in reality or not and the audience never knowing. I mean in total recall itself(the schwartzeneger version), you never REALLY knew -- even the ending was dual-edged.
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I definitely considered that, but 1. I actually didn't want the story to be a complete redo of Total Recall, I only wanted to give a nod because I realized the story I came up with had a lot in common with that one and 2. I wanted this story to be light and comedic and I didn't find a way to give the story that tone using an open ending like that.
If you are wondering how that would go, my thought there was to end the story with Twilight resting, looking through the book, and realizing it gave an explanation of the Box from Princess Twilight Sparkle. Clearly this is too good to be true, so she throws the book across the room and starts on her way back to Zecora's hut to try another escape attempt with Spike trailing behind trying to explain that she's not dreaming.
My problem with this ending is that it seems repetitive and doesn't give the kind of closure I wanted to bring to a one-shot. The problem is apparently unresolved and while it fits with the tone of the story I don't think it has the ending tone I was going for.
However, yes, I could have taken the ending in that direction.
And besides. How do you know she actually woke up that second time?
GET YOUR ASS TO CANTERLOT
Anyways... good story!
This is so funny!
This fanfic needs Pinkie's trombone.
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And she woke up to find no record of the spell
I totally saw that coming. That was funny. Best of luck with future stories.
eugh
. Sorry, I hate Flash :mutters under her breath: stupid stereotypical "cute" human uggh. 
. ANYWAYS. Story was great and funny ^u^ and yeah, I loved that ending 'cause it's true, Twilight does manage to stress herself out all the time, anywhere, even in the perfect day. Wow, Twi.
Ahem.
Is it cool if I do a reading on this?
LOL, gotta love that Spoiler button.
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Certainly you may!
Just let me know when it's done.
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As Pinkie would say, okie dokie lokie!
No objections! I wish there was a sequel! *chair standing on 3 legs* Woah! *falls backward* Ow! My flippin' head hurts.
I can no longer see those words innocently.