The Nightmare is able to possess its victims, feeding on their memories and turning them into shells for it to take over. One pony is more than happy to give it his own memories if only to end the Nightmare's reign forever. Chances are, however, they won't sit well with it.
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Man, wish you'd show the aftermath. Cleanup is just as important as the mess itself. Still, good effort.
I have to like and favorite this, just because it's a pony Doctor Who episode. If I don't, the universe will explode.
this, this right here, this right here is brilliant. just simply brilliant.
this made me cry
this should be animated like so many other fan made films like picture perfect pony or double rainboom some one on youtube animate this i beg of you
That was AWESOME! I had chills the whole time reading it...
4116867 Yes, I was actually inspired by Rings of Akahten.
bit weak. It is obvious that you just wanted to have Dr whooves give the speech, you rushed the set up and didn't add anything. It is okay but it could be better. Like add memories of him as a pony.
3886812 I did to. I also listin to the music and that made it more sad.
3903008 I agree.
3911565 I did too.
Why did my comment get deleted?
5389245 Do you want me to bring it back?
As for why I deleted it, I really don't know. I just didn't like it for some reason. And yes, I have read the Nightmare Arc. However, they mentioned that if they didn't free Rarity, her memories would go kaputskies, at least that's how I interpreted it.
5389322
All I did was point out some criticisms. Usually people that delete those kind of thing don't like criticism, constructive or not, period, and tend to get a bit sore about it. Also, I don't think you can bring it back, so the half hour I spent reading your story and giving feedback on was a waste of time.
5390460 Oh sorry about that.