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Moonlight Descent

Watch as poor Luna slowly loses her will and sanity as she tries to fight off her worst nightmares. But can she really resist forever? Or will she give in to her madness's desire?

Chapters (5)

Nightmares · 2nd Feb 2014 · 1,573 words
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Where lunch is mentioned (But never had) · 2nd Feb 2014 · 1,581 words
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Resemblance · 3rd Feb 2014 · 1,509 words
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Whispers · 4th Feb 2014 · 1,799 words
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The Worst Nightmare · 5th Feb 2014 · 1,917 words
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Hell_Fire

Hell_Fire #1 · Feb 2nd, 2014 · · · Nightmares ·

Hello I'm new my name is Hell_Fire on fim fiction I'm writing a fic similar to yours can please take a look at it even though the vocabulary doesn't
even compare to yours let alone the puctuation may you please get some one to aprove it. It's going to be whole saga

Xeron

Xeron #2 · Feb 2nd, 2014 · · · Nightmares ·

3883116 I would take a look at your fic but until you submit it and it's approved I can't view it. I'm fairly new myself so I don't know if there's a way to view it without being approved but as far as I know there isn't. If you have submitted your fic and it was rejected I would assume it was because of length or punctuation. I would recommend screening through it and fixing little errors so that they will approve it. Then I'll check it out and if I like it and you need help with vocab or punctuation then I'll be happy to lend a hand.

Hell_Fire

Hell_Fire #3 · Feb 3rd, 2014 · · · Where lunch is mentioned (But never had) ·

Xeron thank you I'm sure if work hard my writing will great. And I'll try to
submit the third chapter today I just have contracted H1N2 so I'm not sure