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Dashie Bro


I'm a teenage brony. I'm also a Youtuber, a fimfiction writer an all around nerd. I hope to write great stories that my fans will love. I do this all for them and because I love it!

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I believe that to prevent other mares from being raped the Mane 6 must offer their bodies to Spike.

if this is anthro it should be added to the anthro group under the clop folder

How many favorites am I this thing anyway?:derpyderp1:
I'm so happy you all liked it!:pinkiehappy:

MOAR!!! Give us MOAR!!!
I can't wait until it's Twilights turn

Comment posted by Smurf deleted Mar 4th, 2014

even though it has more than its fair shair of errors, it was a great story and I can't wait for more

The pacing is too fast, the sex is too short, and you failed to describe any physical traits of the characters beside Spike. If it's supposed to be a rape fic it needs a dark tag.

The idea itself isn't bad, but you need to flesh it out. Go read a few high quality clopfics and learn from them. If rape is the intent here, I suggest Dirty Sexy Pony.

Let me get this straight, she knew exactly what would happen when Spike would reach his teen years yet goes ahead and ages him up without a second thought? No safety measures what so ever?

3909078 so in other word the usawal twi

3908039 While I admit it could've been longer, I think lengthy clopfics are kinda hit and miss. :derpyderp1: I don't know, I'll try it in the next chapter.:derpytongue2:

>Anthro Spike x Mane6 story ((Oh, this could be good))
>Spike has a spell cast on him by Twilight ((Eh, not that original of a start, but let's take a look anyway))
>Basically Secret of My (S)Excess ((Yeah, pretty much))
>The Mane 6 spread out around Ponyville to find Spike ((Never Split The Party, and doesn't Pinkie have a Sense for being watched/eavesdropped on?))
>He tackles AJ, knocks her flashlight signal thing out of her hand, rips her clothes off, and pushes into her ((Oooohhh~ It's getting rapey! :pinkiehappy:)
>This happens:

"Aaaah! Take it out! Get out of me!" Applejack yelled. She couldn't move, her body was paralyzed by pain of Spike's length.

((Good, gooood...))

"How can I? You're too tight. I will enjoy this." He said. Spike began thrusting into Applejack with great force. Applejack was helpless, being ruthlessly plowed against her will by one of her friends. She didn't want to admit it, but she was enjoying the rough fucking she was receiving. While she hated being raped, the pleasure she received was too much to deny. Even the rough and tough farm pony couldn't handle the guilt she felt for slightly enjoying it. Applejack wrapped her legs around Spike.

"Come on big boy~ fill me up." She said in a seductive voice, batting her eyelashes.

>Rape
>AJ enjoys rape
>Rape stops being rape
>AFRKGmlLFNORGSRL

I liked it up until that point. Mindbreak the characters if you want, but don't have them ENJOY BEING RAPED RIGHT A-FUCKING-WAY OR IT MAKES IT LESS CHILLING and/or HOT. *flails about*

This is worse than the sausage pizza delivery guy porn setup.

3934728 is this what you think rape is?

4045967 Kinda yeah. It does flip in the middle

4047076 People dont enjoy rape.
I think i have a rape fic in my faves that you can take hints from.
Wait, no...
I think Rarity liked it in the end...

Knowing Spike he'll save Rarity for last.

4077436 not true there is a large possibiity that he could save Twilight for last since shes like an older sister/Mother to him and it is all her falt to begin with

:moustache:

Cool story! can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter (update soon Plz):pinkiehappy::moustache:

i look forward to the chapter when the girls all team up to try to capture him only for it to end in a massive orgy :moustache::heart::yay::twilightsmile::raritystarry::rainbowwild::pinkiehappy::ajsmug:

4077436 You never know~:derpyderp1: Unless you look at my Blog posts for Spoilers. :pinkiehappy:

4081272 I found a little mistake, i'll underline it

"Spike...I can't take it anymore!" Fluttershy cried. Spike knew she was about to cum. He grit his teeth and came deep inside Fluttershy. Fluttershy's pussy twitched and she came; her jot, sticky liquid leaking out onto Spike's member.

I think it should be hot

3983042 Admit it. The pleasure started making her enjoy the rape. And she felt bad about enjoying it afterwards, so it's still rape.:trixieshiftright:

She didn't want to admit it, but she ed being treated so poorly.

did you mean to say something else? like this:

She didn't want to admit it, but she loved being treated so poorly.

4269340 Thanks. I have a bit of a grammar problem. I don't know the name of it, but it makes me see the wrong words I wanna type sometimes.

4495963 dyslexia, if I'm not mistaken

"You ponies will all be my sexy slaves." The young drake said. He pounced and tried to grab them, but failed. He ran out of the room and out the front door.

lolnopebye

Can it be a bonus? Never leave a lady unsatisfied.

A piece of duct tape was placed over Pinkie's mouth.

Ok.

"Owwie! That hurts!" Pinkie cried. Spike chuckled a bit.

How did she get through the duct tape?! That shit's pretty tough!

5435627 Didn't it saw he ripped it off her mouth?
If it doesn't, that's why she said that.

Great story so far! I'm excited to see WHAT HAPPENS NEXT.....Unless it has something to do with flying zebras...wait....cab you add in flying zebras?

Way too short. Also, I was expecting the Mane 6 to act like normal females and place 1000% of the blame on Spike for what happened despite Twilight being the one that started it.

5633008 Sorry. I'm sick today. So my thinking isn't the best. In fact, that epilogue does suck, but it make a point for what's to come in another story.

"Rainbow! That was highly uncalled for." Rarity said. "You know as well as I do that dragons and ponies can not reproduce together.

Are you 100% sure of that :duck:

What no kids?

5634315 You never know :derpyderp1: Dun dun dun!:derpyderp2:

Why do I get the feeling that Rarity is pregnant.....

:moustache:

5645428
Not possible. She was the only one who didn't have Spike release in the appropriate baby fertilizing hole.:raritywink:

5657922 Whoops! I need to fix that.

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