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{and then they fucked}
The end.......
Things got a little convoluted there at the end, still, not a bad read.
What.
345762 I second this response.
I mean, interesting ship between Celestia and Pinkie, and justified to boot, but shit just gets weird at the end. What the fuck was that? It's like everypony threw common sense to the wind, among other things.
AND THEN WE FUCKED!!! that was the first time i have ever truly "lol'd" during a fic. that was brilliant. im still tearing up from laughter
What the fuck did I just read?
9/10. Very well written and had excellent and unexpected (but I should have known better) plot twists!
(straight hair in a good way. LOL)
BEST ENDING EVER
Will be reading soon, I bet I will like it!
See's user name.... Reads story.
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Its all love, lust and loin-licking. What the hell does common sense have to do with that?
Sweet Mother of Celestia
....THIS WAS AWESOME!
Well besides the torment you put Twilight through.
Amazing story, akward as Happy Tartarus ending.
Each character was greatly portrayed, the pace of the story felt right...
But the ending... It felt more random than Pinkie at her most random, you just made the tension dissapear like it never happened. But still the story was freaking amazing! From the very beggining up until before that weird ending. 8.5/10, thumbs-up.
I'm... not sure what to think of this one. It began great, and the follow up was sweet, but that ending... all those plot twists went the thing go haywire, and the good feelings I had at first has dissipated a great deal. Still, good fic overall! But my eyes go cross by the end of it.
The WTF Ending is entirely intentional. It gives a sense of closure, and it involves Pinky Pie.
Does anyone expect anything involving Pinkie Pie to make sense?
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Considering the path the story was taking and the Romance+DARK tags, I was expecting it to be more serious.
But you're the author, you decide to write the story however you want to. You have the final say in it.
But the story was still awesome! Excellent work!
James Earl Jones would be proud.
I think you can turn this into a multi-chapter story. It was great, but I got the feeling that there was plot (no pun intended... Okay maybe!) that could be developed more. Oh and I was stoned when I read this... IT WAS LIKE A FUCKING MOVIE!!!!
Anypony got a pinchy?
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Best. Review. Ever.
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Yay! I made somepony happy! Right now I'm drunk AND stoned... AWESOMENESS!!!!!
Wow i never thought I would like a clop fix but you have changed the way I think
AND THEN WE FUCKED!
And then they fucked.
that went well
if it would have ended any other way then i probably would have continued to feel depressed as things got really dark for a moment
but what i need right now is a clop that does not involve jealousy, hate and sorrow.
pinkie and celestia eh? now that sounds interesting
Letter scene:
and 
then 
then
'd
Party scene:
Twilight being alone scene:
Friends helping twilight scene:
Twilight seeing celestia w/ pinkie scene:
Twilight with luna scene: mix with
Twilight vs pinkie scene:
Celestia's confession:
Ending: i felt like i was
Too many feelings in this one....
I really liked it up until the "I am your mother" reveal. Then suddenly it lost most of its charm. Don't know why. Guess it took the mood from serious to silly too quickly. Also feels like you wanted Celestia to have a not selfish/naive reason for her actions, as though you added her as a mother to excuse what's going on and shift the hate from her. Dunno. Also dislike Twilight's constant latent attraction to Pinkie Pie when she's pining over Celestia. Just feel like Twilight should be disgusted by her fucking her idol. Other than those two points, great story. I liked it.
...Wait, exactly what did i read...
Sooo,
We had:
Pinky and Celestia
Twi And Luna
Closley followed by:
Pinky and Twi fighting
And then twist ending, twilight is Celestia's daughter, AND THEN THEY..... well
That was entertaining.
That was weird. Not really my thing, having Twilight as Celestia's daughter, or the mind feckery going on with Twilight unknowingly crushing on her, but...It was pretty nice.
Extinction Approves of this...yes, quite.