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Rise

Nothing is what it seems in Equestria a long dead prince has returned, two abondond filly's will hold the worlds fate in thare hooves, Celestia's greatest mistake will return to hounte her,and the only one that can stop it is Loyalty but what happens when Loyalty thrives in the darkness it's suppost to stop.

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Spiffers

Spiffers #1 · Mar 21st, 2012 · · · Prologe ( slightly better vers) ·

Sort of interesting... I would make sure that you run this through a spellcheck next time though, there are a lot of spelling errors in there. And presumably the dark tag should be added to this in the future, but I'm sure you're thinking about that already.

Gamerlord99

Gamerlord99 #2 · Mar 22nd, 2012 · · · Prologe ( slightly better vers) ·

350685 ya and I allso need a beta reader, but dark you say? hmm

Spiffers

Spiffers #3 · Mar 22nd, 2012 · · · Prologe ( slightly better vers) ·

352394

Well, I'm up for helping out with proofreading. Anyways, I'm not sure EXACTLY what dark generally entails, but I just mean that the last line basically sounds like there's going to be a good amount of death/gore (you know how the story's going to play out, I don't... yet)

Gamerlord99