Tidings

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Lyra tries to convince everypony that the end is nigh.

First shot at a poem longer than 50 words. Written in alternating form (AB, AB, CD, CD).

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Unknown Six

Unknown Six #1 · Jan 29th, 2014 · · ·

Hmm? Now what might this be, I wonder?

weakpony

weakpony #2 · Jan 29th, 2014 · · ·

Damn, that's pretty powerful .
Your writing is as good as always, and I would love to get more to read from you .

Unknown Six

Unknown Six #3 · Jan 29th, 2014 · · ·

An adaptation to the somewhat gloomy poem on your page... Either I'm too dense or there is some inherent deeper meaning to all this. My vote's on the former.

My guess is that this story is referring to the fandom and the glory days we all had.

I mused how it used to be better; it used to be simple.

Heh. Small world. I ponder this all the time, to be honest.

I'd had a good life, yet despite all that, I refused to go back.

But this right here confuses me. Relating to real life or the fandom, doesn't matter.

Forced to watch it all occur through a single pair of eyes, a single window;
Tired from all the work I was forced to do and alone except for the company of my shadow;

From a single window... I know I'm probably reading into this too much, but maybe a computer screen? Might the "work" be referring to storywriting becoming a chore, or real life work being strenuous.

The feeling that had once guided me, a single spark, had faded into nonexistence.

A single spark.... You did say once that you lost the spark that drives you to continue.

I got a few more, but that's enough speculation.
I just realize that I must look like an idiot right about now. Time to bow out respectfully.

Remember, Divide; I'm here to talk to if you need someone virtual, for what it's worth. Complete isolation ain't never done good for nobody.

Rainy_Daze

Rainy_Daze #4 · Jan 29th, 2014 · · ·

It's great to see a story from you divide.
I'm kind of at a loss at the moment, and unsure of what I feel.
All I know for sure though is that this was an amazing read and think about afterwards.
I'll eagerly await your next story.

ForeverFreest