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RenaissanceBrony


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A very boring story about Discord. I'll save a few minutes of your time and just tell you the whole story right here.
First, Discord can't find his leg. Then he finds it. Then he takes over Equestria.
I'm being completely honest when I say that you should not bother reading it. It's about as interesting as that three-sentence summary I just gave you.

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Comments ( 13 )

AHH! WALL OF TEXT!

Huh, alright. I'll go somewhere else.

You know what this story needs. A twist ending. Like he was telling this story to Twilight and Rainbow dash who have stunned and terrified look on there faces.

Then Fluttershy walks in from doing something and the two of them just leave while he turns and gives a smirk to those two.

Then one of them says a one liner like " Well thats no the worst story I ever heard..."

Yeah. Thats what this story needed.

You know... they can always go and get the elements back. It's not like they don't know exactly where they are.:unsuresweetie:

Sure, that would doom Equestria in the long run and probably kill the tree of harmony blah blah blah they can burn that bridge when they come to it.

Shouldn't this be called "Three's a Crowd"? *Badum Tish* :scootangel:

Love it! Just what I needed to wake up :)!

3864233 Sorry, but I'm just really confused how anyone would even like this story.

3864148 ... But there are only two characters.

3863467 I feel like if Discord actually tried he could very easily stop anypony from getting anywhere close to the Tree of Harmony.

3863414 Haha, I agree that this story definitely needs something. But I think it needs a lot more than a twist ending. It needs a twist ending, and it needs, like, everything else that makes up an actually good story.

3863351 Oops, thanks for pointing that out. I fixed it!

hey, not bad, not bad at all! ^-^ I dunno why you want people to go read other things.

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