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Smileyface1010


Hiya! The name's Smiley! I just like to write really random stories in my spare time :P I also like to proofread other peoples stories, so if you are in need of one, send me a PM!

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Trixie decides to pay a visit to Ponyville for no reason at all. While walking through town, Trixie sees Princess Alicorn Twilight Sparkle and is immediately jealous of her status. She would do to anything to switch lives with her. She remembers a really complicated spell that can let her do just that. But right as she is about to perform it, a certain griffon gets in the way and something goes horribly wrong.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 21 )

Hah! I'm enjoying this, so far.

Very fun, I'll be watching your story, friend.
Hope to see some Rainbow Dash and Gilda (Trixie) back to being friends.
You got 5 mustaches :moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

Will this cover Gilda's (not confirmed) omnivorous diet? Gilda trying to eat meat in a pony body and Trixie trying to resist the magical allure of bacon, steak, and grilled chicken?

3862763 You know, I was actually thinking about including something like that, but I wasn't really sure. We'll just have to see what happens... :trollestia:

Where is the next chapter? WHY IS THERE NOT ALREADY A NEW CHAPTER!!!

Ahem... sorry. I mean, Awesome Story, keep up the good work. :pinkiehappy:

hopefully things will end up better for gilda this even if she is in trixie's body also unusual for me to be first to comment i love this fic too

Well that chapter moved crazy fast....

That was a fun start, I like the background given to each character.

The plot seemed to move a little too quickly here, the bit with Fluttershy especially, bit I'm still enjoying it. It's confusing to picture Trixie as Gilda and Gilda as Trixie but that's why I am reading this story. Can't wait to see how it ends.

The plot still moved a little fast but this was still a fun fic. Glad to see friendship win out.

It's a shame Gilda never tried to use her unicorn horn, especially when Trixie had a little fun with her griffon wings, but it fits with her character.

4825422 Actually, I never even thought of Gilda trying to use a unicorn horn... meh, whatever :derpytongue2: I noticed a few pacing issues as well when I reread this, but I'm working on that. Thanks for reading!

Why did Gilda have to apologize? She didnt do anything

Gilda works as an employee at the Mail Center of Equestria, or the MCE. Her job is the same as many others, to fly the incoming mail to other parts of Equestria. It is located in the Griffon Kingdom, so almost all of the workers are griffons like her. Some say this is because griffons have much better endurance than pegasi.

You were so close with the name Griffonstone but I guess this is close enough because this is way before season 5 came around

With her mind still on Rainbow Dash, Gilda flew slower than usual. She remembered all the fun times she had with her old best friend. Playing together, racing each other, laughing together...

Awww

Oh dear this is some Freaky Friday situation sort of so apparently both Trixie and Glida somehow ended up in Ponyville and Trixie saw Twilight and it looks like she got so jealous of her especially with a new title of Princess of friendship and not only that is an alicorn so she was about to switch bodies with her until Gilda got into her path and now both of them are each others body which whoopsies but this could be a long day for both of them

Well this is a fine pickle these two are in now and Trixie has no idea how to switch back so Gilda decided to find something to get her body back but Trixie was taken away with the other Griffins and Gilda just bump into Fluttershy and somehow they both talk to each other she's sort of apologize for yelling at her and now they're having lunch which I think that's pretty nice I wonder how these two will get the body back

"Oh, come on! You're a great flyer, Fluttershy! You were so awesome when we brought the water up to Cloudsdale, remember?" She walked over to the yellow pony and patted her on the back. "So, what do you say?"

Oh yes one of her best moments in the episode hurricane Fluttershy

Wow that was a very nice story a little fast but nice and it's always good to see how Trixie and Gilda can be accepted to friendship with the Mane 6 and I've always liked that a Redemption story and these two actually can be good friends as well and I kind of wish the show does that but anyway this was a good story keep up the good work

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