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The story of a young phoenix and her chance encounter with a royal alicorn, both of whom share the same pain of losing those they held most dear.

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Philomena, Princess Celestia and Princess Luna are property of Hasbro.

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I like it, but you need about 4 times as many commas. Seriously. Some of the run-ons in this story are just painful to read.

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Sorry about that, my grammar isn't that great. :facehoof:
I'll read through it again and try to fix those mistakes.

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