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This story is a sequel to That First Night Back

Mister Cake reflects on his daughter's first year.

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Dapper Guy #1 · Jan 27th, 2014 · 4 · ·

Part in the middle threw me off there a bit but I like how you portray Mr. Cake as an adapting father, learning the ropes of parenting.

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SuperPinkBrony12 #2 · Jan 27th, 2014 · 2 · ·

Very sweet. Though that middle part, yeah I really think that was going too far. /

ThatWeatherstormChap

ThatWeatherstormChap #3 · Jan 27th, 2014 · 3 · ·

Everything was going normally.
Then something indescribable happened.
Something about poop.
What the actual heck?

Zytharros #4 · Jan 27th, 2014 · 1 · ·

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I wondered what kind of reaction that part would get!
I'm glad you all enjoyed it.

ThatWeatherstormChap

ThatWeatherstormChap #5 · Jan 27th, 2014 · 2 · ·

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You're a madman. A beautifully descriptive, sentimental madman.
- TWC

Kikio3000 #6 · Sep 18th, 2018 · · ·

That was amazing! That poop talk though, LOL! At least I learned something since I'm gonna be a future parent! XD. I kinda want Mrs. Cake to talk about Pound's birthday, too, LOL!

Also: "inclusing inviting my sister and her husband;" should be "including."

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