Payback: A Real Pain in the Rear

Salacar

Salacar #1 · Mar 3rd, 2014 · 4 · 6 · Never Speak of This Again ·

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Contains: humanized characters

Why you do this to me?

Lazaro Sol

Lazaro Sol #2 · Mar 3rd, 2014 · 9 · · Never Speak of This Again ·

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Beautiful

Lean Mean Spleen Unclean

Lean Mean Spleen Unclean #3 · Mar 3rd, 2014 · 1 · · Never Speak of This Again ·

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Some ~~minor reveals~~ slight clarifications.

The first few times the crystal is mentioned/depicted, one of the CMC experiences a conspicuous itching/burning/tingling sensation. Within the context of the Enchanted Comic, this is its way of tossing them "helpful hints", per the check box in the back of the comic. The story only briefly touches on this, but my thinking was that Rarity had used it only once before Sweetie found it. Since she wouldn't have any help from other readers, she turned on the helpful hints so she wouldn't get stuck. Also, she's not a virgin, so she checked the box "no v-card" to allow for vaginal fun in addition to the ATM that is Episode 11's "signature event." She went through the comic solo, which is why only P1 settings were filled in.

As far as the erased safe word, my reasoning is this: whenever Rarity has to actually USE a safe word, she never uses that same safe word again. Her time inside Episode 11 was one of those uncommon times when she actually had to use it. So after she completed it, she erased the word, having no idea that someone would come along later and make the dangerous mistake of entering the episode without the safety net that a safe word provides.

Finally, a personal note about the activities depicted in here. I can't decide which is hotter: a girl who enjoys ATM, or a girl who hates it but does it anyways. I've been fortunate enough to do with this with girls at both ends of this continuum. This one girl is more than a little bi-polar, and bounces around on the subject, depending on her mood. Sometimes she absolutely loves it, and other times she can barely stomach it. This kind of kink is fascinating to me, and the act itself is so extreme, that it draws out a very primal, genuine reaction of lust or revulsion. Sometimes both.

Lean Mean Spleen Unclean

Lean Mean Spleen Unclean #4 · Mar 3rd, 2014 · 1 · · Never Speak of This Again ·

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4026000 Fair question.

I didn't actually settle on using humans until about 1/3 of the way through mapping out the story. The overall narrative tone in this story is meant to focus on realistic details. The real-world practicalities of this kind of mis-adventure were emphasized to give it a very ugly, raw kind of visual scheme. This approach seemed most effective when paired with human anatomy, rather than anthro or equine.

I appreciate that not everybody digs humanized clop, but it just seemed to be the ideal arrangement for this particular story. My future stories will likely use traditional pony anatomy, but I'm not averse to switching around as befits the story in question.

Breath of Plagues

Breath of Plagues #5 · Mar 9th, 2014 · 4 · · Never Speak of This Again ·

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Cause it's the best

Ninjahzzzz

Ninjahzzzz #6 · Mar 10th, 2014 · · · Never Speak of This Again ·

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So we had in order,Hating it,Kinda neutral in terms of the actual penetration (The broken arm and shit-dick were what Scoots seemed to object to the most)
And liking it (Well....Actually,Being a Buttslut is i suppose the most accurate term)

Crystal Winterborne