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Sandy Fortune


Tell stories of love and courage where the good guys win.

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After a pegasus pony is caught off guard by her earth pony friend asking what it was like to fly, she makes a special effort to put some of her experiences into words while on her flight home from Canterlot.

This is a very short story for Equestria Daily's Writer's Training Grounds #4 that focuses mostly on flying.

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Comments ( 4 )

Nice job! Very descriptive and fluid: I felt immersed as I read it! I'll be watching you! :pinkiehappy:

3837239 Thanks! Glad it felt that way. I was hoping it would at least a little bit. I had to rush to meet the deadline and didn't have a chance to edit for more than typos... :fluttershysad:

I really wished I was a pegasus by the time I finished reading this.:rainbowdetermined2:

It was in my read later list for some time now. I really regret nothing in this cade. Of you still write like this, you don't need to worry about anu future stories.

It's still clear Sandy style, not tainted by anything. Pity I changed it.

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