1. I've seen too many bad OC's. CELESTIA MADE ME DO IT. I SWEAR.
2. PLEASE at least read it before disliking it. It's not what you think!
A new alicorn has arrived in Ponyville. Normally, this would be a good thing. But his fast talking attitude is going to quickly earn him a one way ticket to Banishment Camp if Twilight doesn't figure out where this nuisance came from. When even Pinkie Pie doesn't want to be your friend, you'd best pack your bags.
Unfortunately, this supposedly overpowered stallion just doesn't know when to quit, and Twilight wants him gone. While most of the town thinks he's the greatest thing since sliced bread, it's going to be up to her and her friends to convince the town that maybe once a while... alicorns aren't such a good thing.
Sounds interesting!
This looks fun. Count me in.
This does not belong in the All-OC Stories group.
3831615 Ack! If it's in there it was not put there intentionally! I do apologize, I'll see if I can get it removed!
Looking forward to seeing where this goes...
3832853 Heh. It's alright, just so long as it gets cleared up.
3835315 I'm usually very good with the dropboxes, though I did look to see about removing it from the folder I didn't see an option for it. I hope nobody was inconvenienced.
Seconded. This should be a fun trip.
Unleash the Pie upon him!
Oh no.
Well, I do belive that this Bloodrayne (Shudder) character is the biggest, dumbest piece of fuck I have ever had the displeasure of reading about.
Please, carry on.
3880024 That's pretty much exactly the point. But do give me a chance to continue before you spam the dislike button, I think you'll like it x3
Shouldn't there be an OC tag, for the alicorn OC?
3887313 Because he's just a character, not an OC. I despise genuine OCs like this and so many people have them x.x
3887553 Uhhhh...if he's a character, and you created him, he's an OC.
3889613 I think I just had an epic Derpy moment... OC tag added.
Hmmmmmmm.
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Wow, that's a plot twist I did not see coming.
Oh that would just figure if this turns out to be all Twilight's fault. If it is, can't wait to imagine the look on her face.
Bah, I was looking forward to Laser Eyes!Derpy in that last scene. I am dissapoint.
4 cryin' out loud!!! she's the mailpony!! If she never wants him to get his mail then she should just throw it in the dump!!!
Though I do like how into the ditzy character you are, I'm guessing that he\she'll ''steal each others' hearts"??? Maybe
MWAHAHAHAHA!
-A:3
You know what Applejack? Do it, this guy has it coming.
The plot thickens
I have to say, a parody of a badly done OC like this is a refreshing change from the real thing. It helps me deal with this guy knowing we're NOT meant to like him.
Can't wait 4 the next one, real good work!
Oh my goodness this was so awesome!!!
it was hilarious, exciting, detailed , well written the perfect story combo great job keep up the fabulous work!
Such Derpy. Much references. Wow.
I guess they really had to
RAYNE
on his parade
4315011 That's terrible. I'm totally using that.
lol the ending
awesome chapter though 
Well ok then.
...Sephiroth?
And there was much rejoicing.
Hush Twilight. You're just lucky your terrible OC didn't get drafted on enchanted paper.
4318029 Lucky? Or jealous?
Awesome story. The Drama, the darkness, the lies! It's the perfect thing for teen!
Get the gun, we're goin' bad OC hunting!
lol