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an interesting take on things. My only critique is that when Twi was doing her test Celly was outside elsewhere on the grounds.
3833537 Do you mean in the story or in the show? Because in the show Celestia didn't show up until Twilight started going all 'Palantir Freakout' So here Celestia noted she was only going to observe unless something happened.
3833563 In the show I believe when Twi freaks out it's shown that Celly is outside and see the tower exploding and suchs. Your fic made it sound to me like she was going to be closer by than that. She sort of gave the impression of walking somewhere outside before noticing Twi's loss of control.
I could be remembering wrong though.
Very nice take on Twilight's test day and Celestia'a actions through it.
But why it is tagged "comedy"?