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Goldymarg


Hikari ni nare!

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"I haven't really thought about it, have I? Being up so high...I get so anxious just thinking about it."

It all started with such an innocent question. No cynicism, no underlying motive, just a simple request from a friend. A request that was turned down, prefaced by a white lie. It wasn't that Twilight wasn't capable of at least trying, because she could. She was just unsure of herself. Something that was so mundane to everypony participating was something so much more to her. And despite everything that she had been though, past all the challenges and scrapes with death, past all her new responsibilities and worries...nothing upset her more than just sitting down and contemplating it.

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Written and submitted for EqD's Writer's Training Grounds #004 with the prompt, "What's it like to fly?"

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Still very enjoyable. You seem to be stretching a bit but it doesn't stop the story from being very enjoyable. Bravo for doing well, despite feeling you don't like it.

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