Rarity has convinced Pinkie Pie to spend a little time at the spa with her. Since she knows Pinkie can keep a secret, Rarity takes the opportunity to ask some rather... personal questions. Shockingly, Pinkie is quite forward with her answers, but what do you expect from the one and only Pinkie Pie? After all, she loves to make ponies smile!
*nudge* *nudge* *wink* *wink*
You know what I mean, right?
Edited by: Level Dasher
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LOOOOOL
Awesome story XD
I figured it out about halfway through when Pinkie mentioned the tissue paper...Wow, that can be taken way out of context. Still, stories like these are hilarious because it always in massive shock from one of them.
Bravo, my friend! A Spike Moustache for you!
Am I the only one who reread the story after the plot twist?
lololololololollolololololololololololololololoololololololololololololololololololololololololol!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
When she mentioned teaching 2 ponies... I had an idea what was going on...
then needs to do it clenched it.
HAHAAHAHAAHAHAAAHHHAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!
Do one about Spike and the magazines.
I came all over this story as I laughed.
That was freaking hilarious.
Oh Pinkie, why would Rarity be reading about potty training?
I was about half way through when I got the joke, and I was trying really hard not to start laughing, since its like 12:00 at night and I don't want to wake everybody up :P
lot
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Thanks, I must have fat fingered that one and missed it in editing. fixed.
SWEET MOTHER OF CELESTIA O.O
3826580 I have no idea. But that's Pinkie Pie for ya. Now I'm almost interested in seeing just how that plays out.
Rarity, you are a horrible, horrible mare for thinking about what you were thinking about. For shame.
That was simply hilarious. The best jokes really are the ones you don't see coming. Well done.
I'm actually surprised I caught on to what Pinkie was really talking about long before the end
But this was still goooood
I thought I had the twist all figured out, but you had me wrong. Anyway, listening to this song is the absolute best way to read this story
That was entertaining. I'm rather proud of myself for predicting the ending.
Oh, poor Pinkie Pie, Rarity mistook you for a Kinky Pie, and now she's all confused!
I love this.
I kinda figured this one out about halfway through, then psyched myself out because I misunderstood something.
Oh well, still funny.
stories like this are predictable, cause they're all over the place around here and it's a classic plot for comedy. but nevertheless, this was an example of how to do it well. nice job.
HAhahaHAAAAAAAAAAaaaaaa!
Figured that there was going to be some innocuous and hilarious misunderstanding right at the beginning, but it was subtle enough for me not to get it until near the end. Well done.
Looking back some of what Pinkie Pie said should've been a dead giveaway. Can't believe I didn't catch on til Pinkie Pie actually said it.
Also. dare I ask what kind of "toys" Pinkie Pie thought Rarity might use for potty training?
3828819 Yeah. If I hadn't already seen other examples of this kind of story, I would never have figured it out before the end.
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My nephew used something like this: http://www.amazon.com/Quabbin-Toilet-Targets-for-Boys/dp/B0017W4ZTM
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Hmm... some ppl get it early, some get it half way, some not till the last line. It was a tough choice when it came to just how much to give away. I didn't want to make it obvious, but I did want to give a few hints. I haven't read any story like this one before, so I didn't know I was being... less than original. Since "there's nothing new under the sun," I hope I at least executed the story well enough to get some
for those who've seen it before.
I've never felt my hand slap my forehead so hard before I read that ending.....Clever girl.....
When she mentioned two ponies I thought it was eating. It wasn't until the smell that I knew it was the porcelain throne.
3831998 I still think the story was great! Usually when I try to write up something like this that was supposed to have a pay off at the end, every pony figures it out halfway through or sooner. So yeah, this was an awesome story!
Figured it out very early in the story, but loved it anyway!!
you have demonstrated outstanding intellect in this, well done to you and your friend for tricking all of us like that!
You know, I was thinking a shower or maybe a bath at first, then I saw through. But God, I do NOT want any part of whatever Rarity had in mind. Ever.
Oh jesus...
That ending...
I had a hunch, but, my god... Flawless execution of this, mate.
Flawless.
Approved for Twilight's Library.
~Skeeter The Lurker
What the hell did Rarity show Pinkie that made Pinkie think of potty training?
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Nothing. Rarity just talked about how "ponies enjoy themselves," and Pinkie had other things on her mind at that moment. The rest, as they say, is history.
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Cool beans. I didn't even notice 'til now but this story has been added to a few more groups than the initial three. I guess I don't need to do anything more to get it added to Twilight's Library. Thank you.
Come on, Did anyone seriously fall for this? I saw it coming a mile away.
This was a great read and had a hilarious ending. Well done.
..... Right up to the second-last sentence:
(not that funny)
.... ends: stops breathing for a second
Totally predictable, but real fun anyways. Loved it!
Flawless Victory!
Figured it out when Pinkie mentioned smells.
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Must... Not... Burst out laughing in class... And remember to breath!
Coincidentally, I may have read this on the toilet.
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Aye. So did I, mate. *Nods* So did I.
LOL
Loooool.
i knew there was something strange when pinkie said it smelled diferent according to what she ate. then when she said that doing it in bed was gross
. and then i had an epifany, "twice a day, everyday", "giving lessons, to two ponies"... 
... from there on i couldn't stop laughing.
silly rarity
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Saw it coming but didn't stop me from shitting bricks.
That's really all there is to say on the matter.