Out of Love

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A one-shot involving my own take on the Ascension of Princess Mi Amore Cadenza.

Brace yourselves... the feels are coming

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TheSheepMaster

TheSheepMaster #1 · Jan 19th, 2014 · · ·

Great story. Great idea.

divinearcadia

divinearcadia #2 · Jan 19th, 2014 · · ·

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Thanks Took about 45 minutes to write and a few more to tweak it

TheSheepMaster

TheSheepMaster #3 · Jan 19th, 2014 · · ·

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What the heck, man? You wrote that in forty-five minutes?

I'm glad I followed you.

divinearcadia

divinearcadia #4 · Jan 19th, 2014 · · ·

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I just got hit with a bolt out of the blue But let me say that when it hits, it's like I got hit by an Orbital Friendship Cannon

TheSheepMaster

TheSheepMaster #5 · Jan 19th, 2014 · · ·

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True dat.

DuskPhoenix

DuskPhoenix #6 · Jan 19th, 2014 · · ·

Wow. This story is pretty great! It has some nice feels.

Just something I noticed, you have repeated descriptions a few times. When you describe her mane and wing tips color changing, you use seemingly twice. Maybe change that to another word? You do it again when describing her parents' bodies by using the word form in both sentences. That's really just a nit-pick though, this story is nicely done.

divinearcadia

divinearcadia #7 · Jan 19th, 2014 · 1 · ·

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It's all good. Like I said before, I wrote it fairly quickly and I missed a typo or two :b Glad you like the story

Hack Writings

Hack Writings #8 · Jan 20th, 2014 · · ·

You used the wrong word. When you say "Ascension", it should really be "Accession". Ascension means going up, as in 'going up the stairs'. Accession is the proper term.

divinearcadia

divinearcadia #9 · Jan 20th, 2014 · · ·

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The Merriam-Webster definition states that Ascension is: the act of rising or ascending; especially : the act of moving to a higher or more powerful position.

I generally try to check my proper terminology Though yours is correct as well.

doombybbr

doombybbr #10 · May 27th, 2014 · · ·

3813913 ascention refers to an increase in height, either via stairs, the lift or flying.
The heavens are high up.
Thus ascention is a metephor for becomeing more powerful.

divinearcadia

divinearcadia #11 · May 27th, 2014 · · ·

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Hence why it's called an ascension when any of the three tribes becomes an alicorn. They gain power, stature and a plethora of other abilities they lacked before. That's also why it's used when someone ascends to a throne when they become a ruler. Also, it's not much of a metaphor. It's simply a word.

Draco Dei