• Member Since 10th Nov, 2013
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twilight the scribe


Hi. :) I'm a sixteen year old who got curious when I started seeing ponies everywhere on the net. I was skeptical at first, but my little sister got me to watch an episode with her. voila!I'm a brony.

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Celly, Discord and Cadey have been spying observing. Luna and Twilight seem to have feelings for each other!!! The problem? They don't seem to know how each other feels!! What to do?Celestia, Discord and Cadence (Well, mostly Discord) come up with Operation TwiLuna, to get the two together in their own ways. subtletly, beautiful romance, and chaos.
I feel compelled to add "What could possibly go wrong?"

Winner of the first Twiluna group competition. (THANKS AGAIN TO EVERYPONY!!)

Chapters (5)
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Comments ( 254 )

this sounds interesting, I will read and see what happens.

Hahaha, lovely. Discord being cupid makes a sort of sense.

"What could possibly go wrong?" i love that line, anyway a nice well writen pice. Can't wait to see more

Sounds like they had a good 'date' to me. Most everyone I know would enjoy spending the day in a bookstore.

Twilight the Scribe you have the support of me and my army.

sounds like fun) will read when finished

Classic! :rainbowlaugh:
I look forward to reading it.

~RDT

Hmm I'll be watching this...you have my attention.

Good start overall.

A bit heavy on the Luna cliches, but still a fun read.

Me finding fic:

#lunaisbestprincess

I really missed this kind of funny and light twiluna! good job, I will be definitely looking forward to the next chapters!

I'm at campus at the moment writing shit down for my exam, so I haven't read anything yet but the setup sounds like fun. I better not be disappointed or heads will roll! O_O

do you make your cover art by copying pictures into Microsoft paint too? :rainbowlaugh:

Oh god, the God of Chaos, the Goddess of the Sun (teacher and sister to involved both parties) and the Goddess of Love playing matchmaker with Twilight and Luna?

The laughs have been tripled! :pinkiecrazy:

Nice, but why is there a big empty space at the bottom of the chapter?

I can tell this will be good!:heart::pinkiehappy:

Wait a sec, in the description it was said that Twilight was oblivious to Luna's advances yet here in this chapter she seems to be completely, or at least somewhat, aware of what Luna is doing. Oblivious would be she doesn't have the slightest clue, that the only way to get the message across would be for the person (pony in this case) to come right up and say it to them or have it spelled out in bold lettering.

everything. everything could go wrong.:pinkiecrazy:

Haha, Discord as a matchmaker is the best idea ever :rainbowlaugh:
And teaming up with Celestia is the second one :yay:

Discord, God of Chaos, friend to the Element of Kindness... and now a matchmaker. :rainbowlaugh:

Oh this should be good.

Plus it's TwiLuna which is ADORE :rainbowkiss:

First story, 0 blog posts, joined November 2013, featured, Mind blown

This was amazingly well constructed. Awesome work here, really. The idea is simply fascinating, the plot in motion is curiously moving in an interesting direction, first chapter and I am already hooked! :pinkiehappy:

I see how this is going to end now :moustache: hehehe, and I can't wait, I think it was hilarious with Cadence and Discord dressing up like that, pricless! :rainbowlaugh:

Okay, I couldn't help but smile as I read the description, that's quite rare so I'll read and see where this goes...

I am most certainly going to read this... in about an hour when I'm done trudging through a couple dozen other little 'projects' I volunteered for. ugh.

This definitely sounds like it's worth working towards.

This was very entertaining. I love all the lampshades Discord hangs (Like calling it Operation TwiLuna). You also do a really good job portraying the various gods, as it seems to match their canon personalities.

You do seem to rely a bit heavily on clichés though, like referencing Celestia's apparent obsession with cake a bit too often. Still, I understand that they appear rarely enough in the show that you have little to draw on, so that's forgivable.

I'll definitely be following this one.

Well, for a first fic, it is really good. A few issues here and there in terms of grammar, sentence fluency, and show v. tell, but these are all things that are learned in time. Although I expected a bit more of TwiLuna perspective, it was still a good start and I look forward to reading more and watching you grow as a writer.

this shows promise, i shall fave to see where it goes

"What could possibly go wrong?"

Okay, bets are now open. Anypony willing to guess? If you get it right, you get double the amount of bits! :rainbowlaugh:

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(blush) Thanks! Technically, it isn't my first story, as I have been writing another Percy Jackson/Lord of the Rings over on ff.net, but this really is my first foray into romance and MLP fanfiction. I'm really excited!

AND FEATURED IN LESS THAN 24 HOURS! SQUEEE!!!:pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp:
You guys are amazing!!:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:
:twilightsmile:

The correct term is "Tuna."

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The best part about the Tuna sandwich is that it makes its own mayo.

If this were written in old English I'd almost swear this was a parody of the old Shakespearean play Much Ado About Nothing, which shares this exact same plot, but with humans by different names. Either way I can't wait to read more. :)

look out ladies youve had your chance now its discords turn the next chapter is going to be spectacular..not that...these ones..weren't

LET THE GAMES BEGIN!!! :trollestia::trollestia::trollestia::trollestia::trollestia::trollestia: The Chaos Bombs are armed...

This was glorious!
Hmm...the most chaotic thing Discord could do...would probably involve lawn flamingos.

Hey! Congrats on hitting the feature box with your first story!:raritystarry:

If you want something done right, you have to do it yourself.

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thanks!
honestly, im stunned! I wasn't expecting this either, and I am truly shocked at the amount of people who have favourites this story in just a day. I nearly fell out my chair when i saw it in the box. You guys are all awesome. :) really.

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thanks!
honestly, im stunned! I wasn't expecting this either, and I am truly shocked at the amount of people who have favourites this story in just a day. I nearly fell out my chair when i saw it in the box. You guys are all awesome. :) really.

this was very entertaining, but there is one tiny thing that bugs me:

Luna broke into a grin. “Hello, Twilight Sparkle, I am here, as you have requested. You have done an amazing job with the decorating!”
Twilight looked confused. “I requested? Decorating?”
Cadence and Discord shared a panicked look. Uh, oh…

what did Cadence think was going to happen? she had to have known that one of them would say something like that to the other at some point. what? did she think that they would both look at the dinner, the flowers, and the fireflies and just roll with it without asking any questions?

So...Either Discord will actually surprise us all and succeed, or he'll fail horribly and Twilight and Luna will get together on their own somehow without any meddling.

I can't decide which possibility would amuse me more. Either way, I wasn't expecting another update so soon. Here's hoping for another one :raritystarry:

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