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The story of Octavia and the day she was born, this story will tell you where she came from and how she lived her life before she became this professional cello player. Read to find what she went through as a child, from her good and bad times of her life. Every pony has a story to tell but this one is the story of a Hopeful Melody.
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i like this and how its going but i did notice some mis-spelling but not a big deal.
Aww I can just imagine little Octavia and Derpy playing together. Can't wait for the next chapter.
I don't want to sound like an asshole but derpys last name isn't hooves it's Doo and also her first name is Ditzy. Derpys is a nickname given by fans. Also at some point you sound hands instead of hooves. That probably came out a bit dicky so sorry.
3820685 Hey man I rather you sound like mean than lie to me. ;) I know her name is Ditzy Doo but the thing about using that in the story is that most fans won't know who that is. So I just used what was most common and known and my hands down, well I used it as a term. Thanks for your feedback.
3820685 Ok forget the hands down expression, I saw what you meant and fixing it right now.
I liked this chapter, especially the part when Vinyl got her glasses, but quick thing I got to point out....you said they "clapped their hands." I thought ponies had hooves. but that and some other punctual errors were the only thing (I wouldn't say bad) about this chapter, Otherwise loved it.
3825053 Yeah that's a mistake I can't stop making. I'm use to writing stories about humans and I try not to do it as you can see and previous comments. :) I just fixed it.
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D'awwww I just realized how cute this stories cover art is.
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it is isn't it
Good chapter and I liked how you fixed the "Hands" problem and Octavia is growing fast.
I always make myself cry when I write stories like this.
Good chapter like the involvement of the Hooves.
wow...
this is sad...
ok ok... ill be ok
1 thing though, you need to work on some things... but im not to worried about it... im more interested in the story
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3838175 Many other books, will explain more of the story. I will be making many things related to the same story line just through another pony's eyes. I'll be doing a Vinyl, Derpy, Lyra story as well. I will also be doing a Romantic story of how Carnelian and Majestic met. ;) There all official plans.
The new chapter has been posed pone because of issues. I will make sure it is done tommorow.
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cool ill be looking forward to them.
ill be honest though i found this threw the Twilight / Octavia group and when i read the description i thought, Hey this looks good even with out that!
but im still looking forward to Twitavia
Loved it and I felt something for Carnelian, did notice "Hands" again but no big deal.
FUCKING FILLIES :DDDDD
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loved get job thunderbuddie!
I just want everyone to know, I've been thinking about the next chapter. The next Chapter will be posted Feb. 1, 2014. This I promise, I've just been very busy or tired.
This was a cute chapter, I liked it.
Everything just flew by like ultra fast!
good work though!
Well I'm happy that you updated, thank you for this!
I hope to see more soon.
4869292 You will I am doing work with it to finding editors to make it better. :)
4871132 so is this story dead...or what?