>2nd person

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I was inspired by corruption of champions. Nooooh!

But to be honest, I'm probably not ever going to use second person again. It's much more fun playing with the characters than the reader.

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2nd person to me seems a bit lazy, honestly

So this has Futaloo in it. But will she fuck females or males... this is kinda a big reason for me to read or not read.

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So far it's males, might expand further in the future.

3813090 Eeeehhhhh. Not sure if I wanna stick around.

3813097 what are you gay

Anthro Futaloo... sign me up!

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Here's a tip.

Second person addresses the readers directly. This, by default, also means that all emotions the character feels are directly felt by the reader, unless you mess it up. When you describe other people feeling emotions, we can shrug it off that they are feeling it and not we if it ever comes to that; we are not them after all. However, describing the reader's avatar as feeling something that we as the readers do not genuinely feel creates a feeling of Dissonance.

In short, if you do second person, you batter be damn sure you get it right or it's going to blow hard, and not in the good way, and especially not like that shitty pop song.

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I'm well aware of this actually. Part of the risks of doing a second person fic.

3813221 It might help that I have a pretty big futa/dickgirl fetish.

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Simply awesome! And i can´t wait for more of this!

Just wanted to take a quick break and saw this.. i´m satisfied.

Keep up the good work!

Now back to BF4..

It's brilliant!

Thanks dude, will defonitly read later when im... in the mood

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Yes.

That was an amazing clop.... the part that got me the most was. You read a note that says "just in case you need a another snack" I died right there. writer do more futaloo antro style clop!!!!!!

Dude... you write futa stories that are actually awesome. You made me care about Futaloo when ai thought I never would. You're like a wizard.

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Thank you~ Be sure to follow for more futafics as they get finished

. . . What . . . the . . . fluff? . . . I don't normally read mature stories with a sex tag, but this is VERY interesting. Good job.

I wanna see how this ends

You know what would be refreshing? If this relationship between the futa and the male went both ways.

Not that I would be super disappointed if it didn't...

Huh. I feel obligated to write a Futaloo fic now, strangely X3

I can't wait till the next update

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I had JUST mentioned that to a friend of mine right as you wrote that comment.

:3Crazy shit is gonna happen

3817192 Yes. The fact that you don't know what a futa is.
Futa=Both sexes. You're welcome.

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I was inspired by corruption of champions.

... so does that mean when I read this, my character is just gonna grow dicks everywhere?

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No. I was inspired by the perspective used.

Probably the best single fic I have read in 2014 and there many fics that I have already read.

3817469 I know. I was just saying, if you had said that and I read this I would have expected dicks just everywhere.

3817625 If you are born without male genitals, you are not male. It's as simple as that.

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1. I can't belive you guys are debating this.
2. If your born without genitals but still have the penis your still considered male. Your just incapable of reproducing

Stop talking about penises you guys dont have, because do yoou want me to take my dick out again i.imgur.com/GGH4hyb.jpg

This is it.

This is the kind of story I've been waiting for.

THANK YOU!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!! please write more!!

yup

and yup

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Then again, Scootaloo isn't really good at portraying her feelings. I'm giving you more knowledge than you would have in this situation.

3819344 lel
good job

This is weird and gross.
+1

dat bitch gota dik

I... I...

I don't know if we (the unnamed character) is male or female...

wat

I really like this. It's giving me a newfound love for scootaloo. She's climbing my list of best ponies because of you. And it's glorious. Please continue!!

3819998 Male. :P

I wholeheartedly approve of this, and would love to see more of it. If I may ask, how long are you planning on making this?

WHERE DID THIS COME FROM?
I should've expected a Futaloo story from you.

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Depends on feedback. I already have another chapter (a sex one) swirling around in my mind but I'd like to do some more non sex ones as well to keep up world building and character development.

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*cough*

Get learned, you dense plebeian.

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Of course, Futaloo is best futapone.

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Bestfuta is futaloo. Bestpone is debatable on my part.
P.S. it's --> <--

This is gooooooooooooooood. Moar.