Sorry for my absence everyone. I had mid terms up through this Wednesday (they went pretty well by the way ). I had hoped that as soon as my midterms were over I would immediately get back to writing. That really wasn't the case though, I'm so totally just drained of mental effort right now.
Anyway, I'm spending the weekend out on a mini-vacation so hopefully I'll recharge my batteries and get back to my usual schedule soon. I actually already have the next story of this compilation about 60% done (spoiler, it's going to involve tentacles). It will be up in like, I don't know. Some time. Probably a week or two, but I'm not going to give dates anymore, I just break them.
Anyway, hope you enjoyed the farm story. I'm a sucker for feral animal TF, especially when it's crossed with MLP ponies. Blurring that line is always interesting to me, and hey, it all ended out well for the protagonist
4014498 Ooo so am I that one is going to be amazing I think that's number 2 on the list~
And yeah, no worries if you have no interest in a chapter or three. The nature of this fic is to hit tons of different fetishes, so naturally there will be several chapters you have zero interest in.
4016094 It's number 3 or 4 on the list. Tentacles, the AJ one, and then something with pregnancy (the poll winner) will be before it. But no worries, the Chryssi one is coming
I seriously thought you'd tricked me with that low Dark rating but then that sweet ending came about. Very nice desperate situation turned euphoric. A nice change of pace compared to some of the other tales that've been posted so far.
Thank goodness it's a somewhat happy ending! Sometimes just the fear of being stuck in that position is dark enough. I'm glad that the ending wasn't grim just because the tone of the story was grim. It would only be a sad ending if John didn't accept the pony form or if he still turned her down for not being emotionally compatible with John.
One gripe about the alternate ending though, John seemed uncharacteristically mean to "Misty" by whipping her and calling her a stupid horse. Even if that's what he thought she was, I think given the previous context, he wouldn't treat her like that.
4050563 Ah, that's a really good point actually. I guess I sorta let it all go when I wrote that grim ending. I wanted to make it as hopeless and rough as possible for the protagonist, since the entire point of that ending was to have it be a terrible outcome. I suppose I got a little careless in there and broke continuity for John though. I think I may have gotten carried away a little.
4082604 Those are both great ideas, and I wish I had time to write something like that. I always loved Rarity-Cow TF fics, and I wish we had more clopfics about a FiM pony turning into feral animal like this.
Anyway, sadly I have far too much on my plate already to write another cow chapter right now. If you're looking for another cow-TF fic though, consider checking out this one.
It's not quite the same, and it's about Applejack instead of Rarity (It was actually written a month or so before Raricow ever became "a thing"). You might like it though if you're into the idea of a pony being turned into a beast to be milked.
Having read this story before, I had been wondering where the fatal decision was.
I’m about to turn around and head back into the house, but then I pause. I look back at the stables and a slow smile spreads across my face. Hehe, horse stables. Inside are my fellow hoofed creatures. What do they call us again? Ungulates? Never thought I’d be a member of this biological family. I tilt my head and stare at the door. I suppose I should go in and say hello to them.
I think I found it. Side note: The quote was spoilered in an attempt to save the few foolish enough to read the comments on a chapter before reading it for the first time, along with those who happen to be reading the comments from the front page in order to gauge this collection of Twisted short stories as a whole. Twisted Code: I heard my name. What's up? I wasn't talking about or to you. I was referring to the other Twisted, Twisted Spectrum. Twisted Code: Oh... okay... my bad 5961178 Yeah, I read the dark ending after reading the original Google Doc version of this that was shared in the blog post mentioned at the top... And I'm definitely glad this is the version of the ending that's relatively ingrained in my head.
5407970 I second that. The dark ending, obviously, ends where it is, but this one could definitely continue into a beautiful clop story. I want that clop story to occur!
6239467 Zombies. or sharknados. in all honesty the horror industry has fallen on tough times due to pathetic whelps who cant handle being scared. but yeah gypsies! though i think the word they use is romani. i would rather piss off a boccor than a gypsy. i understand Voodoo i do not understand gypsies.
I was worried that she wouldn’t get transformed back into a pony. Glad she was able to turn back into a cute pony. I would really like to see a short follow up to this.
Sorry for my absence everyone. I had mid terms up through this Wednesday (they went pretty well by the way ). I had hoped that as soon as my midterms were over I would immediately get back to writing. That really wasn't the case though, I'm so totally just drained of mental effort right now.
Anyway, I'm spending the weekend out on a mini-vacation so hopefully I'll recharge my batteries and get back to my usual schedule soon. I actually already have the next story of this compilation about 60% done (spoiler, it's going to involve tentacles). It will be up in like, I don't know. Some time. Probably a week or two, but I'm not going to give dates anymore, I just break them.
Anyway, hope you enjoyed the farm story. I'm a sucker for feral animal TF, especially when it's crossed with MLP ponies. Blurring that line is always interesting to me, and hey, it all ended out well for the protagonist
Man most of these I find are just complete misses on just account of their subjects, although still waiting for that Applejack Human "The Fly" hybrid
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Ooo so am I that one is going to be amazing
I think that's number 2 on the list~
And yeah, no worries if you have no interest in a chapter or three. The nature of this fic is to hit tons of different fetishes, so naturally there will be several chapters you have zero interest in.
Oh, twisty end. I was already expecting Misty to end as a horse. Personally, im happy she ended as a pony. Would have been pretty dark otherwise.
Oh look, a new Twisted Tale!
*Reads Authors Notes*
Oh fuck me I already read this on the GDoc!
Ooh, new chapter!
I thiiink I read it before, but a refresher's never bad!
Locked, cocked, and ready to typo.
Very good love story. A nice pace out.
Any plans on adding the dark ending as its own chapter? I personally liked this one much better, but for completeness sake. Just curious.
Weird and twisted clop WITH a happy ending!?
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4014514 So, when do you plan to make that Chrysalis fic?
Oh that happy ending,
Maybe make two more variations? One dark and one HumanxPony? I kinda expected HxP then all the sudden ferals
So the guy ended as a pony?
I like how this is the exact same story as another one that I've read, but the pony name is changed :P
Is it weird I want a part 2 where the now perma-pony still fucks the horses?
Yes. Yes it is... but still.
Might want to fix that.
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It's number 3 or 4 on the list. Tentacles, the AJ one, and then something with pregnancy (the poll winner) will be before it. But no worries, the Chryssi one is coming
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Here you go, just what the doctor ordered.
It's a fic written by Rustle my Jimmies, but it's pretty much... yeah.
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I wrote that one, it was a story I posted on my blog several months ago.
I changed the pony's name because originally it was Penny, but that name was used in the last chapter so I wanted to use a new one here.
Yay! A happy ending!
I seriously thought you'd tricked me with that low Dark rating but then that sweet ending came about. Very nice desperate situation turned euphoric. A nice change of pace compared to some of the other tales that've been posted so far.
Thank goodness it's a somewhat happy ending! Sometimes just the fear of being stuck in that position is dark enough. I'm glad that the ending wasn't grim just because the tone of the story was grim. It would only be a sad ending if John didn't accept the pony form or if he still turned her down for not being emotionally compatible with John.
One gripe about the alternate ending though, John seemed uncharacteristically mean to "Misty" by whipping her and calling her a stupid horse. Even if that's what he thought she was, I think given the previous context, he wouldn't treat her like that.
4050563
Ah, that's a really good point actually.
I guess I sorta let it all go when I wrote that grim ending. I wanted to make it as hopeless and rough as possible for the protagonist, since the entire point of that ending was to have it be a terrible outcome.
I suppose I got a little careless in there and broke continuity for John though. I think I may have gotten carried away a little.
4082604
Those are both great ideas, and I wish I had time to write something like that. I always loved Rarity-Cow TF fics, and I wish we had more clopfics about a FiM pony turning into feral animal like this.
Anyway, sadly I have far too much on my plate already to write another cow chapter right now. If you're looking for another cow-TF fic though, consider checking out this one.
It's not quite the same, and it's about Applejack instead of Rarity (It was actually written a month or so before Raricow ever became "a thing"). You might like it though if you're into the idea of a pony being turned into a beast to be milked.
Is this like the Penny For Your Thoughts on your blog? Since it's quite familiar :)
Yay! A happy, kinda weird, but still happy ending.
I wouldn't mind seeing a continuation of this... Anyone? Please?
even without reading the dark ending that was still plenty dark for me thanks o__o"......
WHOA
A happy ending... that's almost as scary as a dark ending.
I loved it, but it caught me so off guard...
YES! I AM SO HAPPY IT HAD A GOOD ENDING! As it was finishing I was constantly thinking "please good ending, please good ending". MAN I LOVE THIS!
Having read this story before, I had been wondering where the fatal decision was.
I think I found it.
Side note: The quote was spoilered in an attempt to save the few foolish enough to read the comments on a chapter before reading it for the first time, along with those who happen to be reading the comments from the front page in order to gauge this collection of Twisted short stories as a whole.
Twisted Code: I heard my name. What's up?
I wasn't talking about or to you. I was referring to the other Twisted, Twisted Spectrum.
Twisted Code: Oh... okay... my bad
5961178 Yeah, I read the dark ending after reading the original Google Doc version of this that was shared in the blog post mentioned at the top... And I'm definitely glad this is the version of the ending that's relatively ingrained in my head.
5407970 I second that. The dark ending, obviously, ends where it is, but this one could definitely continue into a beautiful clop story. I want that clop story to occur!
And then there are the special crazy people, like me, who hate dark endings but read them anyway.
(What would horror writers do without mysterious gypsies?)
6239467 Zombies. or sharknados. in all honesty the horror industry has fallen on tough times due to pathetic whelps who cant handle being scared. but yeah gypsies! though i think the word they use is romani. i would rather piss off a boccor than a gypsy. i understand Voodoo i do not understand gypsies.
I was worried that she wouldn’t get transformed back into a pony. Glad she was able to turn back into a cute pony. I would really like to see a short follow up to this.
Oh thank god it ended good.
No thank you
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Amusingly enough, it has been like 8 years but I am actually writing that story idea right now. Should be done in a few weeks